小试身手
假如你是李华，下周日是你父亲的生日，你亲自动手给你的父亲做了一个礼物，请你将制作礼物的过程写成一篇英语短文。
内容要点：
1. 你给父亲做了一个书架，因为他喜欢看书而且有很多书。
2. 你的好朋友 Andrew 来帮你并带了些工具。你们先阅读说明，然后就开始做了。
3. Andrew 不仅擅长 DIY，而且乐于助人。你们花了两个小时就做好了。
4. 因为你太兴奋了，所以你在使用工具时一直犯错误。你们一起干得很开心。
5. 这是你给父亲做的第一份礼物，你希望……
注意：
1. 文中必须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯。
2. 省略号部分，请展开合理想象，作适当发挥。
3. 80词左右，已给出部分不计入总词数。
Next Sunday is my father's birthday. I made a present for my father by myself.
I made a bookshelf for my father because he likes reading and has many books.
My good friend Andrew came to help me and brought some tools.
We read the instructions first, and then we began to work.
Andrew is not only good at DIY, but also helpful.
It took us about two hours to finish it.
I kept making mistakes when I used the tools because I was too excited.
We had a good time working together.
This is the first present I made for my father. I hope he will like the present and have a happy birthday.
解析：
【分析】
本题为英语记叙文写作任务，要求以李华的身份，围绕“为父亲制作生日礼物（书架）的过程”展开写作，需覆盖全部给定内容要点。解题思路：1. 确定文体与人称：用第一人称，时态以一般过去时为主；2. 按要点顺序组织内容：先说明制作书架的原因（父亲爱看书且书多），再叙述好友Andrew帮忙带工具、先读说明再动手的过程，接着介绍Andrew的优点（擅长DIY、乐于助人）及制作耗时，然后说明自己因兴奋用工具出错、两人合作愉快，最后补充合理结尾（希望父亲喜欢礼物）；3. 确保语句通顺，控制词数在80左右。
【解析】
根据写作要求，整合所有要点，用规范的英语表达串联内容，时态正确，语句连贯，补充合理结尾。具体写作内容如下：
Next Sunday is my father's birthday. I made a present for my father by myself. I made a bookshelf for my father because he likes reading and has many books. My good friend Andrew came to help me and brought some tools. We read the instructions first, and then we began to work. Andrew is not only good at DIY, but also helpful. It took us about two hours to finish it. I kept making mistakes when I used the tools because I was too excited. We had a good time working together. This is the first present I made for my father. I hope he will like the present and have a happy birthday.
【答案】
Next Sunday is my father's birthday. I made a present for my father by myself. I made a bookshelf for my father because he likes reading and has many books. My good friend Andrew came to help me and brought some tools. We read the instructions first, and then we began to work. Andrew is not only good at DIY, but also helpful. It took us about two hours to finish it. I kept making mistakes when I used the tools because I was too excited. We had a good time working together. This is the first present I made for my father. I hope he will like the present and have a happy birthday.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、要点整合写作
【点评】
本文全面覆盖所有内容要点，时态正确，语句流畅自然，补充的结尾符合语境，体现了对父亲的真挚心意，符合题目要求。
【难度系数】
0.7
