[典型例题]
假如你是李华，下周末你们班将举行一次聚会。在聚会上，大家想自己动手做一些喜欢吃的东西。许多同学都爱吃水果沙拉。你会做吗？请你以“How to Make a Fruit Salad”为题，写出制作水果沙拉的过程。
要求:80词左右。
[思路点拨]
高分模板
开头:点明主题,引出下文
主体:介绍水果沙拉的具体制作方法
结尾:鼓励自己动手尝试,总结全文
How to Make a Fruit Salad
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①
Do you like a fruit salad? Do you know
how to make it? ②
Let me tell you.③
First, you need an apple, a banana, an orange and some yogurt. You should peel the apple, the banana and the orange.
Next, cut them up.
Then, put them into a bowl, and pour the yogurt into it.
Finally, mix them together. Now you can have it.
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④
Do you understand? Try it yourself.
名师点评
①同时使用两个一般疑问句,彰显写作功底。
②祈使句的使用是加分项。
③使用了 first, next, then 和 finally,思路清晰。
④结尾很有吸引力,让人产生尝试的欲望。
答案：How to Make a Fruit Salad
Do you like fruit salad? Do you know how to make it? Let me tell you.
First, you need an apple, a banana, an orange and some yogurt. You should peel the apple, the banana and the orange. Next, cut them up. Then, put them into a bowl, and pour the yogurt into it. Finally, mix them together. Now the delicious fruit salad is ready.
Do you understand? Try it yourself!
解析：
【分析】本题要求以“How to Make a Fruit Salad”为题写一篇80词左右的短文，需遵循“引出话题—详细描述制作过程—总结鼓励”的结构。写作时要结合思维导图的步骤，用first、next、then、finally等序数词清晰呈现制作流程，开头用疑问句引出主题，结尾鼓励动手尝试，确保语言简洁，符合字数要求。
【解析】按照题目要求，先引出话题：用两个疑问句点明主题，引出下文；接着按制作顺序，依次写出需要的材料、削皮、切碎、放入碗中加酸奶、搅拌的步骤，用first、next、then、finally使逻辑清晰；最后总结并鼓励尝试，完成短文。
【答案】How to Make a Fruit Salad
Do you like fruit salad? Do you know how to make it? Let me tell you.
First, you need an apple, a banana, an orange and some yogurt. You should peel the apple, the banana and the orange. Next, cut them up. Then, put them into a bowl, and pour the yogurt into it. Finally, mix them together. Now the delicious fruit salad is ready.
Do you understand? Try it yourself!
【知识点】英语应用文写作；过程描述写作；序数词运用
【点评】本文结构清晰，严格遵循“引出话题—详细过程—总结鼓励”的框架，使用序数词使制作步骤逻辑分明，语言简洁流畅，符合字数要求，很好完成了写作任务。
【难度系数】0.6
