小试身手
假如你是张华,请你以“My school life”为题,写一篇80—100词的英文短文,介绍一下你的校园生活。要点如下:
1.在徐州的一所中学读书,学校生活丰富多彩;
2.课程上午八点开始,下午四点结束;不需要每天穿校服;
3.学习许多科目,最喜欢的科目是物理;在午餐时间能听音乐;
4.作业少,每天花半小时做家庭作业,有许多时间进行课外活动,经常和好朋友一起到图书馆读书;
5.对学校生活的建议。
My school life
My name is Zhang Hua. I am a student in a middle school in Xuzhou. My school life is colourful.
School starts at 8 a. m. and finishes at 4 p. m. We don't need to wear school uniforms every day.
We have lots of subjects, such as PE and Art. My favourite subject is Physics because I think it's interesting.
We can listen to music at lunchtime. We don't have too much homework, so I spend half an hour doing homework every day.
We have plenty of time for after-school activities. I often read books with my friends in the library.
I would like to suggest that we should go on a school trip every month to relax and learn more about nature and the outside world.
解析:
【分析】首先明确写作任务:以张华的身份,围绕“My school life”主题,覆盖所有给定要点(徐州的中学、校园生活多彩;上课时间8点至4点、无需每日穿校服;所学科目、最喜欢物理、午餐听音乐;作业少、每日半小时作业、课外活动多、常和朋友去图书馆;学校生活建议),需用英语撰写80-100词的短文,确保语句通顺、要点齐全,符合英语表达习惯。
【解析】按照“开篇介绍身份与学校情况→说明上课时间与校服要求→介绍科目、喜好及午餐活动→讲述作业与课外活动→给出建议”的逻辑顺序组织内容,选用恰当的词汇和句式,将所有要点串联成连贯的短文,注意词数控制,避免语法错误。
【答案】My school life
My name is Zhang Hua. I am a student in a middle school in Xuzhou. My school life is colourful.
School starts at 8 a. m. and finishes at 4 p. m. We don't need to wear school uniforms every day. We have lots of subjects, such as PE and Art. My favourite subject is Physics because I think it's interesting. We can listen to music at lunchtime. We don't have too much homework, so I spend half an hour doing homework every day. We have plenty of time for after-school activities. I often read books with my friends in the library.
I would like to suggest that we should go on a school trip every month to relax and learn more about nature and the outside world.
【知识点】英语书面表达,话题作文
【点评】本题为初中英语常见的话题写作题,考查学生的英语语言组织能力和要点覆盖能力,要求围绕指定主题完成短文,兼顾内容完整性与语言准确性。
【难度系数】0.6