[典型例题]
请以“My school life”为题，写一篇90词左右的英文短文，介绍一下你的学校生活。要点如下：
1.学校的位置和规模；
2.课程设置、学生的学习和老师的工作等情况；
3.学校作息时间，课后活动等情况；
4.你对学校生活的感受及改善建议。
[思路点拨]
高分模板
开头:概述学校的位置和规模
主体:介绍课程设置、师生情况、作息时间和课外活动
结尾:表达对学校生活的喜爱之情并提出改善建议
My school life
①My school is in the east of our city. It is not very big. More than 1,000 students are studying in our school.
②There are many interesting subjects for us to choose from, such as Music and Art. The students study hard and the teachers are very good at teaching.
Classes begin at 8 a. m. and end at 4 p. m. on weekdays. After school, we can ③
join different clubs and
take part in colourful activities.
I like my school life, but I would like to make a suggestion. ④
Our school should provide more computers in the library so that it is easier for us to surf online.名师点评
①开头介绍了学校的地理位置和规模。more than结构有别于常见的there be句型表达，使文章句式更丰富。
②使用there be句型和并列句，介绍学校课程和师生学习和工作情况。
③ 固定短语join different clubs和take part in以及形容词colourful的使用介绍了丰富多彩的课外生活。
④so that引导的目的状语从句以及“It is+adj. +for sb to do sth.”句型使文章更加出彩。
答案：My school life
My school is in the east of our city. It is not very big. More than 1,000 students are studying in our school.
There are many interesting subjects for us to choose from, such as Music and Art. The students study hard and the teachers are very good at teaching.
Classes begin at 8 a.m. and end at 4 p.m. on weekdays. After school, we can join different clubs and take part in colourful activities.
I like my school life, but I would like to make a suggestion. Our school should provide more computers in the library so that it is easier for us to surf online.
解析：
【分析】
本题为英语话题写作题，要求以“My school life”为题，围绕给定的四个核心要点（学校位置与规模、课程及师生情况、作息与课后活动、生活感受及建议）完成90词左右的短文。解题思路为：先梳理思维导图的四个要点，按照“开头概述-主体分述-结尾总结建议”的结构展开，运用合适的英语句型和短语丰富表达，确保覆盖所有要点且词数符合要求。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 开头：介绍学校位置（城市东部）和规模（不大，有1000多名学生），用“More than 1,000 students are studying in our school”提升句式多样性；
2. 主体第一部分：说明课程设置（音乐、美术等有趣科目），以及学生学习努力、老师教学出色的情况；
3. 主体第二部分：介绍工作日作息（8点上课、4点放学），课后可参加不同俱乐部和多彩活动；
4. 结尾：表达对学校生活的喜爱，提出具体建议（图书馆增加电脑方便上网），运用so that引导的目的状语从句和“It is + adj. + for sb to do sth.”句型优化表达，符合词数要求。
【答案】
My school life
My school is in the east of our city. It is not very big. More than 1,000 students are studying in our school.
There are many interesting subjects for us to choose from, such as Music and Art. The students study hard and the teachers are very good at teaching.
Classes begin at 8 a.m. and end at 4 p.m. on weekdays. After school, we can join different clubs and take part in colourful activities.
I like my school life, but I would like to make a suggestion. Our school should provide more computers in the library so that it is easier for us to surf online.
【知识点】
英语话题写作、英语句型运用、英语短语搭配
【点评】
本文紧扣题目所有要点，结构清晰层次分明；运用了丰富的英语表达，如more than、join different clubs等短语，以及so that从句、It's + adj + for sb to do sth等句型，使文章句式多样、语言地道，符合90词左右的要求，是一篇优秀的话题作文。
【难度系数】
0.6
