B. 写作。(满分15分)(2025·江苏常州·期中)
阳光中学即将举办“阳光好少年(the Sunshine Excellent Student)”候选人推荐活动,请根据下方的表格提示,推荐你的好朋友Grace,成为“阳光好少年”。
| Name | Grace |
| --- | --- |
| Looks and qualities | slim, ponytail... / honest, cheerful... |
| Hobbies |

DIY... reasons... |
| Learning habits | 至少两点…… |
【要求】1. 内容涵盖所有要点,注意文章条理,语句通顺,可适当发挥。
2. 词数90左右,已给出的文章开头和结尾,不计入总词数。
3. 短文中不得使用真实的人名及学校名称。
Grace is a Grade 8 student in our school. She is my good friend. I want to recommend her as our Sunshine Excellent Student.
We all think that Grace will make a Sunshine Excellent Student.
答案:One possible version
Grace is a Grade 8 student in our school. She is my good friend. I want to recommend her as our Sunshine Excellent Student. She is slim with a ponytail, and she is very honest and cheerful. She always wears a smile, which makes her popular among classmates.
Her hobby is DIY. She loves making various items like hand-painted mugs and wooden photo frames by herself. She thinks DIY not only fosters her creativity but also helps her master useful practical skills. In terms of learning habits, she is quite remarkable. She always plans her study time carefully and reviews lessons promptly after class. Moreover, she often reads extra books to broaden her knowledge. She is kind, hard-working and full of positive energy.
We all think that Grace will make a Sunshine Excellent Student.
解析:
【分析】这是一篇推荐类英语应用文写作题,需根据表格提示推荐Grace为“阳光好少年”。解题思路:1. 明确写作目的,语气真诚正式;2. 必须覆盖所有表格要点:外貌(slim, ponytail)、品质(honest, cheerful)、爱好(DIY及原因)、学习习惯(至少两点);3. 结合给定的开头和结尾,补充内容使文章连贯,词数控制在90左右,语句通顺,适当发挥。
【解析】首先承接开头,介绍Grace的外貌与品质:She is slim with a ponytail, and she is very honest and cheerful. She always wears a smile, which makes her popular among classmates. 接着写爱好DIY及原因:Her hobby is DIY. She loves making various items like hand-painted mugs and wooden photo frames by herself. She thinks DIY not only fosters her creativity but also helps her master useful practical skills. 然后写学习习惯(两点):In terms of learning habits, she is quite remarkable. She always plans her study time carefully and reviews lessons promptly after class. Moreover, she often reads extra books to broaden her knowledge. 最后补充她的优点衔接结尾:She is kind, hard-working and full of positive energy.
【答案】One possible version
Grace is a Grade 8 student in our school. She is my good friend. I want to recommend her as our Sunshine Excellent Student. She is slim with a ponytail, and she is very honest and cheerful. She always wears a smile, which makes her popular among classmates.
Her hobby is DIY. She loves making various items like hand-painted mugs and wooden photo frames by herself. She thinks DIY not only fosters her creativity but also helps her master useful practical skills. In terms of learning habits, she is quite remarkable. She always plans her study time carefully and reviews lessons promptly after class. Moreover, she often reads extra books to broaden her knowledge. She is kind, hard-working and full of positive energy.
We all think that Grace will make a Sunshine Excellent Student.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、人物介绍、要点整合写作
【点评】本题结合校园活动,考查学生根据表格提示完成人物推荐类写作的能力,要求覆盖所有要点,语句通顺,适当发挥,贴近学生生活,能有效考查学生的英语综合运用能力。
【难度系数】0.3