B. 写作。(满分15分)
读万卷书,行万里路。4月23日是世界读书日,你们学校为此举行了以“Reading makes a better me”为题的征文活动,请你写一篇英语短文投稿,内容需包含表格中所有要点。

【注意】1. 100词左右,已给出部分不计入总词数。
2. 可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
Reading makes a better me
Read ten thousand books, and travel ten thousand miles. Reading is important to everyone.
I hope all of us can develop a good reading habit and enjoy reading.
答案:B. One possible version
Reading makes a better me
Read ten thousand books, and travel ten thousand miles. Reading is important to everyone.
I often read various books. I read for half an hour every day and I often go to the library.
My favourite book is The Secret Garden. The theme of this book is getting close to nature and helping each other. It tells us we should keep hopeful and never give up when facing difficulties.
Since I developed the habit of reading daily, I have changed quite a lot. Firstly, I am no longer addicted to playing mobile games. I am more focused on learning. Secondly, I have become increasingly good at thinking and have learned to solve problems independently.
I hope all of us can develop a good reading habit and enjoy reading.
解析:
【分析】
本次写作要求以“Reading makes a better me”为题,需涵盖表格中所有要点:个人阅读习惯、最喜欢的书《秘密花园》及主题、阅读带来的至少两点改变。解题思路为:先承接开头引出自身阅读习惯,再介绍喜爱的书籍及主题,最后阐述阅读带来的具体改变,结尾呼应主题,确保内容连贯、要点齐全,符合词数要求。
【解析】
1. 承接开头,介绍自身阅读习惯:对应表格中“读各种各样的书、每天读书半小时、经常去图书馆”的要点,用简洁语句表述;
2. 介绍最喜欢的书:明确书名《秘密花园》,对应主题“亲近自然、互帮互助、保持希望、收获成长”,补充书籍传递的积极意义;
3. 阐述阅读带来的改变:选取至少两点具体改变(如减少沉迷手机、更专注学习、学会独立思考等),使内容真实具体;
4. 结尾呼应开头,呼吁养成阅读习惯,确保全文连贯通顺,符合词数要求。
【答案】
B. One possible version
Reading makes a better me
Read ten thousand books, and travel ten thousand miles. Reading is important to everyone.
I often read various books. I read for half an hour every day and I often go to the library.
My favourite book is The Secret Garden. The theme of this book is getting close to nature and helping each other. It tells us we should keep hopeful and never give up when facing difficulties.
Since I developed the habit of reading daily, I have changed quite a lot. Firstly, I am no longer addicted to playing mobile games. I am more focused on learning. Secondly, I have become increasingly good at thinking and have learned to solve problems independently.
I hope all of us can develop a good reading habit and enjoy reading.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、要点整合、主题表达
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求,完整覆盖表格所有要点,内容具体充实,语言连贯自然,准确传递了阅读对个人成长的积极影响,符合初中英语写作的评分标准。
【难度系数】
0.6