B. 写作。(满分15分)(2025·江苏宿迁·调研改编)
青少年杂志决定举行一次以“My best friend”为题的英语征文比赛。假如你的最好的朋友是Millie,请根据以下信息,介绍Millie的基本情况。

【要求】1. 必须包含所有信息,使文章连贯、通顺。
2. 词数80左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名等信息。
My best friend
Millie is my best friend.
She is such an excellent girl. I hope you will make friends with her one day.
答案:One possible version
My best friend
Millie is my best friend.
She is in Class One, Grade Eight. She has different classes in different classrooms. She is one of the slimmest girls in our class with bright and smiling eyes. She is honest, helpful and has a sense of humour. When I feel down, she can cheer me up. She likes playing badminton and reading. Since she was young, she has formed a habit of reading. She hopes the school library will have more books because it's a good place to open up our minds. She wants to be an English teacher to share her love for English with students.
She is such an excellent girl. I hope you will make friends with her one day.
解析:
【分析】本题是英语介绍类写作,要求以“My best friend”为题,根据给定的Millie的相关信息(班级、外貌、性格、爱好、对学校建议)完成短文,开头和结尾已给出,需覆盖所有要点,语句通顺,词数80左右。解题时,先梳理表格中的所有信息点,再将这些信息自然组织成连贯内容,结合合适的英语词汇和句型,确保符合写作要求。
【解析】1. 梳理要点:从表格提取班级(八年级一班,去不同教室上课)、外貌(班里最苗条的女生之一,有明亮的笑眯眯的眼睛)、性格(有幽默感、诚实、乐于助人,沮丧时能让人振作)、爱好(打羽毛球、读书,从小养成好习惯)、对学校建议(希望图书馆有更多书,是开阔思维的好地方),未来计划可合理补充(如成为英语老师,符合语境);2. 组织语言:运用“one of the slimmest girls”“have a sense of humour”“cheer sb up”“form a habit”等短语串联要点,确保语句通顺、词数符合要求;3. 检查:确认所有要点覆盖,无真实敏感信息,符合要求。
【答案】One possible version
My best friend
Millie is my best friend.
She is in Class One, Grade Eight. She has different classes in different classrooms. She is one of the slimmest girls in our class with bright and smiling eyes. She is honest, helpful and has a sense of humour. When I feel down, she can cheer me up. She likes playing badminton and reading. Since she was young, she has formed a habit of reading. She hopes the school library will have more books because it's a good place to open up our minds. She wants to be an English teacher to share her love for English with students.
She is such an excellent girl. I hope you will make friends with her one day.
【知识点】英语写作、形容词最高级、常用动词短语
【点评】本题考查八年级学生的信息整合与英语书面表达能力,要求根据给定信息完成连贯短文,难度适中,能有效检验学生的英语综合运用水平。
【难度系数】0.6