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五、书面表达
假如你是学校“Hands-on Club”的一员,有很多DIY的经历。有失败的,也有成功的。请你根据以下提示,写一篇100词左右的英文短文,分享你觉得最有趣的一次DIY经验。

What you made:

Why you made it:

How you made it:

Your feelings and thoughts:

答案:As a fan of DIY, I have many DIY experiences. The most interesting one is making a paper lantern for the Lantern Festival.
Making the paper lantern was fun. First, I carefully cut the red paper into several squares. Then I glued them together to form the lantern's body. Next, I tied the body to a stick with strong thread so that I could carry it easily. Finally, I put a small lamp inside the lantern. When I turned it on, the warm light made the lantern look quite beautiful.
The DIY experience was harder than I thought. I made some mistakes and my desk was in a mess. But when it was complete, I felt proud. This experience teaches me that being patient is the key to success.
解析:
【分析】本题要求写一篇关于DIY经历的英文短文,需围绕提示的四个要点(制作的物品、制作原因、制作过程、个人感受)展开。解题时,首先要确定具体的DIY内容,接着按照“是什么-为什么做-怎么做-感受”的逻辑组织内容,用first、then等连接词梳理制作步骤,最后表达真实感受和感悟,确保语言通顺、符合英语表达习惯,字数达标。
【解析】1. 确定核心内容:制作的是纸灯笼,原因是为元宵节准备;2. 梳理制作步骤:先将红纸剪成正方形,再粘成灯笼主体,接着用线绑在棍子上方便携带,最后放入小灯;3. 表达感受:过程虽有困难、出错,但完成后很自豪,感悟到耐心是成功的关键;4. 组织语言,用合适的连接词串联,形成逻辑清晰、内容完整的短文,字数控制在100词左右。
【答案】As a fan of DIY, I have many DIY experiences. The most interesting one is making a paper lantern for the Lantern Festival.
Making the paper lantern was fun. First, I carefully cut the red paper into several squares. Then I glued them together to form the lantern's body. Next, I tied the body to a stick with strong thread so that I could carry it easily. Finally, I put a small lamp inside the lantern. When I turned it on, the warm light made the lantern look quite beautiful.
The DIY experience was harder than I thought. I made some mistakes and my desk was in a mess. But when it was complete, I felt proud. This experience teaches me that being patient is the key to success.
【知识点】英语书面表达、DIY主题写作、英语连词运用
【点评】本题结合生活实际,考查学生的英语书面表达能力,要求学生整合信息、组织语言,既锻炼了语言运用能力,又引导学生反思DIY过程中的感悟,是一道兼具实用性和考查性的题目。
【难度系数】0.5
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