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五、书面表达
假如你是张华,收到了校长室发来的学生意见调查表。请你认真阅读这份调查表,并结合自己的实际情况和想法,给校长室写一封100字左右的回信。

Dear headmaster,
I'm writing to make some suggestions on how to improve some parts of our school life.

Our library is modern and new. However, I don't think we have enough reading materials in it. Can we have some weekly magazines and newspapers to help us know what's happening in the world? I like the food in our dining hall, but I suggest that it should provide more local food.

My teachers are all kind and patient to us. With their support and help, I can learn all my subjects well. Moreover, I hope there will be more clubs for us to choose from.

I hope my suggestions help improve our school life.





Yours sincerely,
Zhang Hua
答案:Dear headmaster,
I'm writing to make some suggestions on how to improve some parts of our school life.
Our library is modern and new. However, I don't think we have enough reading materials in it. Can we have some weekly magazines and newspapers to help us know what's happening in the world? I like the food in our dining hall, but I suggest that it should provide more local food. My teachers are all kind and patient to us. With their support and help, I can learn all my subjects well. Moreover, I hope there will be more clubs for us to choose from.
I hope my suggestions help improve our school life.
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Hua
解析:
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题,要求以张华的身份给校长室写回信,需结合调查表的三个问题(学校图书馆、食堂食物、老师学业帮助)及额外建议,完成100词左右的书信。解题思路:1. 遵循英文书信格式,开头点明写信目的是提建议;2. 对应调查表的三个问题,结合自身实际给出肯定或否定的回答,并补充合理建议;3. 增加调查表外的合理建议,结尾表达对学校生活改善的期望,确保内容连贯、符合字数要求。
【解析】
按照英文书信结构写作:1. 开头说明写信目的是给学校生活提建议;2. 回应调查表问题:①肯定图书馆现代化,建议增加周刊和报纸;②表示喜欢食堂食物,建议增加本地菜;③肯定老师的帮助,感谢其支持;3. 补充额外建议:增加更多社团;4. 结尾表达希望建议有助于改善学校生活。
【答案】
Dear headmaster,
I'm writing to make some suggestions on how to improve some parts of our school life.
Our library is modern and new. However, I don't think we have enough reading materials in it. Can we have some weekly magazines and newspapers to help us know what's happening in the world? I like the food in our dining hall, but I suggest that it should provide more local food. My teachers are all kind and patient to us. With their support and help, I can learn all my subjects well. Moreover, I hope there will be more clubs for us to choose from.
I hope my suggestions help improve our school life.
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、英语书面表达、建议表达
【点评】
本题贴近学生校园生活,考查学生运用英语进行实用写作的能力,要求紧扣题目要求,内容贴合调查表,语言通顺自然,符合书信规范。
【难度系数】
0.5
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