五、书面表达
友谊是一束温暖的阳光,是一份珍贵的宝藏。假如你校英文周刊正以“Friendship”为题向同学们征稿。请根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文投稿。词数100左右。

Friendship
In our life, everyone needs friends. They make our lives brighter and more colourful.
答案:Friendship
In our life, everyone needs friends. They make our lives brighter and more colourful.
I have such a friend. Her name is Lily. She has a round face and always wears her hair in a ponytail. She is kinder and more humorous than anyone else I know. We share secrets and always help each other.
To get along with friends, I think the most important thing is to be honest. If you tell lies, your friends will not trust you. Also, we need to be patient. Listening to our friends can support them when they meet problems.
Friendship matters a lot in everyone's life. A true friend will make our lives much better and happier.
解析:
【分析】本题为英语书面表达题,要求以“Friendship”为题投稿,需按三个提示完成写作:首先介绍自己最好的朋友,其次给出与朋友相处的至少两点建议,最后阐述友谊的意义。写作时需遵循“引入朋友→相处建议→友谊意义”的逻辑,语言通顺,控制词数在100左右,符合征稿语境。
【解析】第一步,介绍最好的朋友:可从姓名、外貌、性格及相处日常入手,如示例中介绍Lily的外貌、性格特点,以及分享秘密、互相帮助的相处细节;第二步,给出相处建议:选取至少两点实用建议,如诚实(不撒谎以获得信任)、耐心(倾听朋友的烦恼);第三步,阐述友谊意义:点明友谊让生活更美好快乐,是珍贵的存在。写作时注意逻辑连贯,使用恰当的英语表达,避免语法错误。
【答案】Friendship
In our life, everyone needs friends. They make our lives brighter and more colourful.
I have such a friend. Her name is Lily. She has a round face and always wears her hair in a ponytail. She is kinder and more humorous than anyone else I know. We share secrets and always help each other.
To get along with friends, I think the most important thing is to be honest. If you tell lies, your friends will not trust you. Also, we need to be patient. Listening to our friends can support them when they meet problems.
Friendship matters a lot in everyone's life. A true friend will make our lives much better and happier.
【知识点】英语书面表达、友谊话题写作、英语应用文写作
【点评】本题围绕学生熟悉的“友谊”话题,结合三个明确的写作要点,考查学生的英语语言运用能力和对友谊的理解,结构清晰,贴近学生生活,便于学生发挥。
【难度系数】0.3