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五、书面表达
为加强全民防灾减灾意识,校报英语专栏面向全校征稿。请根据以下提纲,写一篇100词左右的文章,介绍一种自然灾害或紧急情况,并提出灾难发生时以及发生后,大家能做些什么。









答案:A lot of earthquakes happen in the world every year. An earthquake can cause big problems to us. We may get hurt when it happens. Moreover, we may lose our houses, even our family and friends.
We can't prevent an earthquake, but we can follow some tips to keep us safe and sound. We should calm down first when it happens. If we are outside, we should stay away from high buildings. We'd better run to an open space. If we're trapped indoors, don't try to jump down from the windows. Stay under the desk and wait for help.
After the disaster, we should help those in need. We can raise some money or offer things they need. We should learn more about it instead of just being afraid of it.
解析:
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题,要求围绕“远离危险”主题,选择地震等自然灾害或紧急情况,需说明该灾害带来的危害,再列举灾中、灾后至少3点应对措施,词数约100。解题时,先选易展开的地震作为写作对象,再对应提纲分三部分:点明灾害、阐述危害(人员受伤、房屋损毁、失去亲友等)、分灾中(户外去开阔地、室内躲坚固家具下等)和灾后(帮助他人、学习防灾知识等)的具体做法,确保符合要点数量和词数要求。
【解析】
1. 确定写作主题:选择地震,因其是常见且易说明的灾害;
2. 写危害部分:说明地震会导致人员受伤、房屋倒塌,甚至失去亲友等问题;
3. 写灾中措施:分情况说明,户外需远离高楼到开阔地,室内躲在坚固家具下等待救援;
4. 写灾后措施:帮助受灾者、学习防灾知识等,确保至少3点;
5. 调整语言,控制词数,使内容连贯、符合英语表达习惯。
【答案】
A lot of earthquakes happen in the world every year. An earthquake can cause big problems to us. We may get hurt when it happens. Moreover, we may lose our houses, even our family and friends.
We can't prevent an earthquake, but we can follow some tips to keep us safe and sound. We should calm down first when it happens. If we are outside, we should stay away from high buildings. We'd better run to an open space. If we're trapped indoors, don't try to jump down from the windows. Stay under the desk and wait for help.
After the disaster, we should help those in need. We can raise some money or offer things they need. We should learn more about it instead of just being afraid of it.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、灾害话题英语、实用建议写作
【点评】
本题结合防灾减灾的生活主题,考查学生的英语写作能力,要求学生围绕给定提纲组织内容,将语言运用与实际生活结合,既提升英语表达能力,又增强防灾意识,是贴近生活的优质写作题。
【难度系数】
0.5
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