七、书面表达。(11 分)
梦虽遥,追则能达;愿虽艰,持则可圆(Dreams and wishes may be far, but they can be fulfilled with dedicated pursuit.)。梦想是心灵的火种,点燃激情,照亮前行的路。心怀梦想,脚踏实地,每一步都是通往成功的阶梯。请以“Never give up on dreams”为题,根据要点和要求,用英语写一篇短文。
要求:1. 文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名;
2. 词数 100 左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Never give up on dreams
Everyone has dreams. Although sometimes they seem far away, we can achieve them as long as we keep working hard for them.
答案：One possible version:
Never give up on dreams
Everyone has dreams. Although sometimes they seem far away, we can achieve them as long as we keep working hard for them.
My dream is to become an environmental scientist. To make this come true, I will study Biology and Chemistry well. And I'll take part in tree-planting activities every spring. Most importantly, I plan to read more books to improve my knowledge.
However, I face two main problems. I find it hard to achieve a balance between my schoolwork and my hobbies. I often feel nervous about Maths problems, which affects my confidence.
To solve these problems, I've made a detailed study plan. I will plan my day carefully, including short breaks. For Maths, I will listen carefully in class, review my notes and do more practice after class. Besides, I remind myself that challenges are the gifts that push me to grow.
Like Ne Zha, I believe all the efforts can change my fate. As the movie says, "Who I am depends on myself." If I never give up, my dream will surely come true!
解析：
【分析】
拿到这道题首先要明确核心写作主题是“永不放弃梦想”，题干已经给出开篇语句，不需要额外创作开头。接下来可以对照表格给出的提示要点按顺序搭建行文逻辑：第一步先明确一个好展开的正向具体梦想，比如成为环境科学家这类职业梦想；第二步对应“为梦想而做的事情”的提示，先点明要学好的相关学科，再补充合理的配套行动，比如参加相关实践活动、拓展阅读积累知识；第三步对应“遇到的困难”的提示，先写学业和爱好难以平衡的设定，再补充符合学生真实情况的额外困难，比如数学学习有压力、影响自信心；第四步对应“解决困难的措施”的提示，先写做好时间规划的方案，再补充对应学科困难的针对性解决方法；最后结合哪吒精神“我命由我不由天”的内核写出追梦决心，呼应主题。全程注意不要出现真实校名和师生姓名，控制总词数在100左右即可。
【解析】
1. 搭建行文框架：严格覆盖题干表格给出的全部5项要点，分模块依次展开，保证不遗漏得分点：
① 承接给定开头，点明个人具体梦想：我的梦想是成为一名环境科学家
② 写追梦的实际行动：说明要学好生物、化学等相关学科，同时补充参加植树活动、阅读相关书籍拓展知识的行动
③ 写遇到的实际困难：先点明很难平衡学业和爱好，再补充做数学题时常感到焦虑、打击自信心的困难
④ 写对应的解决措施：先说明制定详细计划、合理规划每日时间的方案，再补充数学课认真听讲、课后多练习来提升数学成绩的针对性方法
⑤ 收尾升华：结合哪吒“我的命运由我自己决定”的精神，点明只要坚持不放弃，梦想终会实现，呼应主题
2. 行文时使用To make this come true、However、To solve these problems等过渡词衔接上下文，让语句逻辑更流畅自然
3. 最后核查内容：确认没有出现真实校名、师生姓名，词数符合要求，修正语法小错误，保证表达通顺。
【答案】
One possible version:
Never give up on dreams
Everyone has dreams. Although sometimes they seem far away, we can achieve them as long as we keep working hard for them.
My dream is to become an environmental scientist. To make this come true, I will study Biology and Chemistry well. And I'll take part in tree-planting activities every spring. Most importantly, I plan to read more books to improve my knowledge.
However, I face two main problems. I find it hard to achieve a balance between my schoolwork and my hobbies. I often feel nervous about Maths problems, which affects my confidence.
To solve these problems, I've made a detailed study plan. I will plan my day carefully, including short breaks. For Maths, I will listen carefully in class, review my notes and do more practice after class. Besides, I remind myself that challenges are the gifts that push me to grow.
Like Ne Zha, I believe all the efforts can change my fate. As the movie says, "Who I am depends on myself." If I never give up, my dream will surely come true!
【知识点】
提纲类英语写作
语篇衔接技巧
话题作文谋篇
【点评】
本题属于贴近学生日常学习生活的励志类话题作文，题干已经给出了非常清晰的分层提示要点，大幅降低了写作的构思门槛，引导学生顺着“明确梦想-付诸行动-遇到困难-解决问题-坚定决心”的逻辑梳理完整的追梦路径，结合哪吒精神的设定也贴合学生熟悉的流行文化，容易写出真情实感。参考范文完全覆盖所有得分要点，过渡自然，表达地道，收尾点题升华到位，符合初中英语写作的评分标准。
【难度系数】
0.7
