八、书面表达。(共 10 分)
最近,你校开展了“巧手制书签,书香满校园”主题活动,请你以“A DIY bookmark for my favourite book”为题,根据表格中的内容提示写一篇英语短文,向学校英文报的读书专栏投稿,介绍制作书签的目的和过程,并分享制作心得。100 词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。

A DIY bookmark for my favourite book
Last week I took part in our school's Reading & Bookmark-making activity.
答案:One possible version:
A DIY bookmark for my favourite book
Last week I took part in our school's Reading & Bookmark-making activity. Its purpose was to help us enjoy reading our favourite book. My favourite book is the classic novel Journey to the West, one of the Four Great Classical Novels. I like Monkey King best because he helps the weak and never gives up.
In order to make a bookmark, I prepared a card, scissors, glue and so on. First, I cut the card into long strips. And then I drew a picture of a monkey on the left and wrote down a famous saying "Nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it." on the right to encourage me not to give up when facing difficulties. At last, I glued it to a thin piece of wood.
Although I met with some difficulties in this process, I never gave up and I am proud of myself.
解析:
【分析】
拿到这道书面表达题,首先要明确写作的三个核心板块,完全对应表格给出的提示维度:第一部分先完成“制作原因”的内容,先点明做书签是为了帮助自己更好地享受阅读,选定一本熟悉的读物,交代清楚书名、书籍类型、自己最喜爱该书的点;第二部分完成“制作过程”的内容,先罗列用到的材料工具,再用first、then、at last这类表顺序的连接词,把表格提示的裁剪卡片、绘图、写句子等动作按逻辑串联,补充合理的收尾步骤;最后第三部分完成“制作感受”的内容,贴合主题写出自己的真实体验,全程注意叙事用一般过去时,控制总词数符合100词左右的要求,不要遗漏要点。
【解析】
本篇作文可以按照三段式结构完成:
1. 首段承接已给出的开头,点明本次活动制作书签的目的,介绍自己最喜爱的书籍《西游记》,说明它是中国四大古典名著之一的经典小说,点明自己最喜爱孙悟空不畏困难、永不放弃的特质,完成第一部分要点。
2. 中段先说明准备的材料:卡片、剪刀、胶水等工具,再按先后顺序描述制作流程:首先把卡片裁成长条,接着在左侧画孙悟空的图案,在右侧写下励志名言,最后把做好的卡片粘在薄木片上,把所有制作相关的提示要点全部覆盖。
3. 末段收尾,说明制作过程中虽然遇到了小困难但自己没有放弃,表达完成后十分自豪的心情,完成感受部分的内容。
整体行文逻辑连贯,时态统一,符合校园英文报投稿的语境要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
A DIY bookmark for my favourite book
Last week I took part in our school's Reading & Bookmark-making activity. Its purpose was to help us enjoy reading our favourite book. My favourite book is the classic novel Journey to the West, one of the Four Great Classical Novels. I like Monkey King best because he helps the weak and never gives up.
In order to make a bookmark, I prepared a card, scissors, glue and so on. First, I cut the card into long strips. And then I drew a picture of a monkey on the left and wrote down a famous saying "Nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it." on the right to encourage me not to give up when facing difficulties. At last, I glued it to a thin piece of wood.
Although I met with some difficulties in this process, I never gave up and I am proud of myself.
【知识点】
英语叙事类写作,一般过去时运用,逻辑连接词使用
【点评】
本篇参考范文完整覆盖了题目给出的所有提示要点,内容贴合“巧手制书签,书香满校园”的活动主题,分层清晰,制作过程用顺序连接词串联条理分明,将书籍内容和书签设计巧妙结合,语言表达准确地道,词数符合要求,完全适配校园英文报读书专栏的投稿场景。
【难度系数】
0.6