经典例题
学校英语俱乐部将举行题为“My best friend”的演讲比赛，请你根据所给中文提示，用英语完成一篇70词左右的演讲稿。
【要点】1. Mandy，14岁，七年级(2)班。
2. 现与父母住在徐州……
3. 戴眼镜……
4. 最喜欢的学科是英语……
5. 周末她喜欢……，我们经常……
【要求】1. 文章应包括所有要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯，所给开头句不计入总词数。
2. 可以适当发挥，使文章内容充实。
My best friend
My best friend is Mandy.
写作指导
1. 用第三人称来写。
2. 时态为一般现在时。
3. 突出与人物相关的信息，并可适当发挥。
写作模板
遣词造句
1. 她在七年级(2)班。(in Class 2)
She is in Class 2, Grade 7.
2. 她常常帮助我学习英语。(help sb. with sth.)
She often helps me with my English.
3. 在周末，她喜欢做运动。(at the weekend)
At the weekend, she likes doing sport.
高分范文
My best friend
My best friend is Mandy. She is 14 years old. She is in Class 2, Grade 7. Now she lives in Xuzhou with her parents. She thinks it's interesting to live there. She wears glasses. She looks very lovely. Her favourite subject is English. She often helps me with my English. At the weekend, she likes doing sport. We often play volleyball in the playground after school. We often have a good time together.
实战演练
开学已经一个月了，请根据表格中的信息以“This is me”为题写一篇英语短文，向你的同学介绍你自己。
【要求】1. 词数80词左右。
2. 内容必须包括表格中的要点并可适当发挥，要求语句通顺、条理清晰、书写工整。
This is me
Hello, everyone! I'm Daniel,
and I am 13 years old. I come from Jiangyan. I study in Class 9, Grade 7 in Sunshine Middle School. I am tall. I have short hair. I don't wear glasses. I go to school by bus every day.
I like English very much because I think it is interesting and useful. My English teacher is very kind. I also like doing sport and I like playing basketball best, because it can make me happy and relaxed.
I want to be a basketball player and I hope my dream can come true.
解析：
【分析】这是一篇英语自我介绍类应用文写作，要求用第一人称、一般现在时，需包含年龄、籍贯、班级、外貌、上学方式、爱好及梦想等要点，适当发挥使内容连贯，词数控制在80左右，需符合初中英语写作语句通顺、要点齐全的要求。
【解析】写作步骤如下：1. 开头问候同学并点明自己的名字；2. 依次介绍基本信息：年龄、来自的地方、所在班级及学校；3. 描述个人外貌特征和上学方式；4. 介绍爱好及喜欢的原因；5. 表达自己的梦想，确保语句通顺、要点齐全，符合词数要求。
【答案】This is me
Hello, everyone! I'm Daniel, and I am 13 years old. I come from Jiangyan. I study in Class 9, Grade 7 in Sunshine Middle School. I am tall. I have short hair. I don't wear glasses. I go to school by bus every day.
I like English very much because I think it is interesting and useful. My English teacher is very kind. I also like doing sport and I like playing basketball best, because it can make me happy and relaxed.
I want to be a basketball player and I hope my dream can come true.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、一般现在时
【点评】本文紧扣写作要求，涵盖了自我介绍的核心要点，适当补充了爱好及梦想的内容，使文章充实连贯，符合初中英语写作的规范，是一篇合格的范文。
【难度系数】0.6
