实战演练
你是否幻想过周围的一切事物都如你所愿，都是你理想中的样子？请以“My ideal school”为题写一篇短文。主要从以下几个方面来阐述。
【要求】1.文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。
2.短文应包含以上三个方面的要点。
3.词数90左右。
My ideal school
答案：One possible version
My ideal school
Let me tell you something about my ideal school! Every morning we don't need to get up early, because classes start at 8:30. At 11:30, we can go home to have lunch. In the afternoon, school is over at 3:30, and then we can take part in a lot of after-school activities. At school, we can choose any subject we like. I hope we can have computer lessons and PE lessons every day because I like Computer Science and doing sport. We have less homework and have more time for our hobbies. At school, there are many kinds of clubs such as the Swimming Club and the Computer Club.
This is my ideal school. I love it very much. What about your ideal school?
解析：
【分析】本题为英语命题作文，要求以“My ideal school”为题，围绕给定的三个要点（理想作息时间、自主选课、课余俱乐部）写作，词数约90，且不能出现真实信息。解题思路为：先点明主题，再分别从作息安排、课程选择、课余活动三个方面展开阐述，最后结尾表达对理想学校的喜爱，确保所有要点都涵盖，语句通顺连贯，符合词数要求。
【解析】1. 开头引出主题：直接点明要介绍自己的理想学校；2. 阐述作息时间：说明上课时间晚、放学早，不用早起，有充足的休息和活动时间；3. 说明课程选择：强调可以自主选择喜欢的课程，作业少，有更多时间做爱好；4. 介绍课余活动：提及有各种俱乐部，如游泳、计算机俱乐部；5. 结尾总结，表达喜爱。
【答案】One possible version
My ideal school
Let me tell you something about my ideal school! Every morning we don't need to get up early, because classes start at 8:30. At 11:30, we can go home to have lunch. In the afternoon, school is over at 3:30, and then we can take part in a lot of after-school activities. At school, we can choose any subject we like. I hope we can have computer lessons and PE lessons every day because I like Computer Science and doing sport. We have less homework and have more time for our hobbies. At school, there are many kinds of clubs such as the Swimming Club and the Computer Club.
This is my ideal school. I love it very much. What about your ideal school?
【知识点】英语写作、要点表达、语句连贯
【点评】本文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖了给定的三个要点，结构清晰，语言流畅自然，符合词数要求，准确表达了对理想校园的向往之情。
【难度系数】0.5
