每到夏天,总有些地方洪水肆虐。我们应如何在洪水中保护自己呢?你们班在英语课上就这一问题进行了讨论。请你根据以下提示,用英语说说你的观点。

【要求】1.包含所有给出的要点提示,可适当发挥,省略号部分要求至少自拟1点。
2.70词左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Good morning, everyone! Floods happen nearly every summer. Today I'd like to talk about how to
protect ourselves in the flood.
Firstly, we should often watch the news about the flood during the rainy season. We need to prepare water, food and medicine before the disaster comes. Secondly, when there is a flood, we must move to higher places at once and stay there to wait for rescue. Remember not to try to swim through the floodwater. Thirdly, if the flood washes us away, we should keep calm. We can catch something made of wood and it can help us get out of the water. If we need help, we can also call the police.
答案:One possible version
Good morning, everyone! Floods happen nearly every summer. Today I'd like to talk about how to protect ourselves in the flood.
Firstly, we should often watch the news about the flood during the rainy season. We need to prepare water, food and medicine before the disaster comes. Secondly, when there is a flood, we must move to higher places at once and stay there to wait for rescue. Remember not to try to swim through the floodwater. Thirdly, if the flood washes us away, we should keep calm. We can catch something made of wood and it can help us get out of the water. If we need help, we can also call the police.
解析:
【分析】本题是英语写作题,要求围绕“洪水自救”展开,需覆盖灾害发生前的准备(观看洪水新闻、准备水和食物)、灾害发生期间的应对(到高处、不游泳),还需额外补充至少1点自救措施,开头已给出,字数控制在70左右。解题时,先承接开头明确主题,再分灾前、灾中逻辑组织要点,最后补充合理的自救细节,确保语言连贯、要点齐全。
【解析】首先,开头已给出,续写主题为“如何在洪水中保护自己”;接着写灾前准备:观看洪水相关新闻、准备水和食物;然后写灾害中:转移到高处、不要游泳;最后补充1点自救措施,如保持冷静、抓住木质漂浮物等待救援,确保所有要点都包含,语言符合英语表达习惯。
【答案】Good morning, everyone! Floods happen nearly every summer. Today I'd like to talk about how to protect ourselves in the flood. Firstly, we should often watch the news about the flood during the rainy season. We need to prepare water, food and medicine before the disaster comes. Secondly, when there is a flood, we must move to higher places at once and stay there to wait for rescue. Remember not to try to swim through the floodwater. Thirdly, if the flood washes us away, we should keep calm and catch something wooden to stay afloat.
【知识点】英语写作、自然灾害话题表达
【点评】本题结合生活实际的自然灾害场景,考查学生运用英语表达实用自救知识的能力,要点明确,需适当拓展内容,符合初中英语写作的考查要求,难度适中。
【难度系数】0.5