地球上没有了动物,就如蓝天中没有了白云。某英文报正在举办以“保护野生动物”为主题的征文活动,你打算以“Save wild animals”为题写一篇短文投稿,请从野生动物所面临的危险、我们为什么要保护野生动物以及如何保护野生动物三个方面进行阐述。
野生动物所面临的危险
可举例说明,如熊、老虎……
为什么要保护野生动物
……(至少两点)
如何保护野生动物
不买用野生动物的皮毛制成的衣服,制定法律……(至少三点)
【要求】1.必须包括提示中的所有信息,可适当发挥。
2.90词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
3.不得使用真实的姓名、校名、地名等。
Save wild animals
Humans and wild animals live in the same world, but many of the wild animals are indanger.
答案:One possible version
Save wild animals
Humans and wild animals live in the same world, but many of the wild animals are in danger. For example, giant pandas may not have a place to live or food to eat because the bamboo forests are becoming smaller and smaller. Wolves have fewer and fewer living areas. Tigers and bears are in danger because humans hunt them for their fur, bones and other parts of their body.
We protect wild animals not only because they are our friends, but also because they can help keep a balance between humans and nature.
Therefore, we must take action to save wild animals. First, we shouldn't buy coats made of wild animals' fur any more. Second, we should call on everybody to know the importance of wildlife. Last but not least, the government should make laws to protect wild animals.
解析:
【分析】
首先明确写作主题为“Save wild animals”,开头已给出,需围绕三个指定方面展开:1. 野生动物面临的危险:举例说明(如熊、老虎因被猎杀、栖息地缩减陷入危机);2. 保护原因:至少两点(野生动物是人类朋友,维持人与自然的平衡);3. 保护措施:至少三点(不购买野生动物皮毛制品、宣传保护重要性、政府制定相关法律),同时需控制字数在90词左右,符合征文要求。
【解析】
先承接开头,举例说明野生动物的危险(如老虎、熊被猎杀,栖息地减少);接着阐述保护的两点原因(是人类朋友、维持生态平衡);最后提出三点保护措施(不买皮毛制品、宣传保护重要性、政府立法),组织成连贯的短文,确保覆盖所有要求要点,语言准确流畅。
【答案】
Save wild animals
Humans and wild animals live in the same world, but many of the wild animals are in danger. For example, giant pandas may not have a place to live or food to eat because the bamboo forests are becoming smaller and smaller. Wolves have fewer and fewer living areas. Tigers and bears are in danger because humans hunt them for their fur, bones and other parts of their body.
We protect wild animals not only because they are our friends, but also because they can help keep a balance between humans and nature.
Therefore, we must take action to save wild animals. First, we shouldn't buy coats made of wild animals' fur any more. Second, we should call on everybody to know the importance of wildlife. Last but not least, the government should make laws to protect wild animals.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、野生动物保护话题
【点评】
本文紧扣“保护野生动物”主题,覆盖所有要求要点,结构清晰(危险-原因-措施),语言流畅自然,符合征文的字数要求,是一篇符合要求的优秀征文。
【难度系数】
0.7