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十、(2025·无锡市梁溪区期末)书面表达。(共14分)
快乐的寒假即将来临,为丰富中学生的假期生活,学校英语社团将组织冬令营,期待大家的参加。假设你是李华,打算参加其中一项活动,请根据以下海报信息,写一篇英文申请信。

注意事项:1. 申请信须根据海报信息自拟,要求观点明确、语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意;
2. 词数不少于80,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 信中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear teachers,
I am Li Hua. I'd like to join in the meaningful winter camp.
First, let me introduce myself. I am a Grade 8 student at Sunshine Middle School. My favourite hobby is birdwatching. I'm careful and patient enough to look after animals.
I would like to choose the trip to Wildlife Park and see different kinds of animals because I am interested in wild animals. I want to learn to look after and feed animals too. I think they are in danger and we should take action to protect them right now.
I'll be very happy if I can join in the winter camp.


Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
答案:One possible version:
Dear teachers,
I am Li Hua. I'd like to join in the meaningful winter camp.
First, let me introduce myself. I am a Grade 8 student at Sunshine Middle School. My favourite hobby is birdwatching. I'm careful and patient enough to look after animals.
I would like to choose the trip to Wildlife Park and see different kinds of animals because I am interested in wild animals. I want to learn to look after and feed animals too. I think they are in danger and we should take action to protect them right now.
I'll be very happy if I can join in the winter camp.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
解析:
【分析】这是一道英文申请信写作题,解题思路需紧扣海报要求分三步:首先,完成自我介绍,对应海报中“who are you(爱好、性格等)”的要求,说明自身身份、爱好与性格;其次,从两个活动中选定一项,结合海报里该活动的具体内容,联系自身情况阐述选择原因;最后,收尾表达参与意愿,确保语句通顺、符合申请信格式且词数达标。
【解析】写作步骤:1. 补充自我介绍:说明自己的身份(如八年级学生),介绍爱好(如观鸟)与性格(细心耐心);2. 选定Activity A,结合海报中Activity A的内容(看不同种类动物、学习照顾和喂养动物),说明选择原因:自身对野生动物感兴趣,想学习照顾动物,还想为保护濒危动物出力;3. 收尾表达希望加入冬令营的意愿,完成信件。
【答案】One possible version:
Dear teachers,
I am Li Hua. I'd like to join in the meaningful winter camp.
First, let me introduce myself. I am a Grade 8 student at Sunshine Middle School. My favourite hobby is birdwatching. I'm careful and patient enough to look after animals.
I would like to choose the trip to Wildlife Park and see different kinds of animals because I am interested in wild animals. I want to learn to look after and feed animals too. I think they are in danger and we should take action to protect them right now.
I'll be very happy if I can join in the winter camp.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【知识点】英文书信写作、书面表达、活动说明
【点评】该范文符合申请信格式,内容紧扣海报要求,自我介绍清晰,选择活动的原因结合了自身爱好与活动内容,语句通顺,观点明确,符合题目各项要求。
【难度系数】0.6
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