七(南通海门区期末)书面表达。(6分)
地球是我们共同的家园,保护地球是每个人义不容辞的责任。请你以“Protect our Earth”为题,写一篇英语小短文,说一说为了保护地球我们应该做什么和不应该做什么。
要求:内容需覆盖导图所有信息,并适当发挥想象;语句通顺,意思连贯,不少于50词(已给出内容不计入总词数)。
Protect our Earth
The Earth is our home. We all should love and protect it.
To protect the Earth, we shouldn't drive too much. When you go to some nearby(附近的) places, you can choose to ride a bike or walk. We shouldn't litter everywhere, or the environment will be messy and dirty. Water is useful in our daily life, so we shouldn't waste water. You can turn off the tap when you brush your teeth. Then what should we do? We should plant more trees to keep the air clean. We should learn to recycle things to make new things. Let's take action together. Our Earth will be more beautiful.

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Protect our Earth
The Earth is our home. We all should love and protect it. To protect the Earth, we shouldn't drive too much. When you go to some nearby(附近的) places, you can choose to ride a bike or walk. We shouldn't litter everywhere, or the environment will be messy and dirty. Water is useful in our daily life, so we shouldn't waste water. You can turn off the tap when you brush your teeth. Then what should we do? We should plant more trees to keep the air clean. We should learn to recycle things to make new things. Let's take action together. Our Earth will be more beautiful.
解析:
【分析】
本题要求以“Protect our Earth”为题写英语短文,需结合导图的6个图标信息,分别对应“不应该做的事”(禁止开车、不乱扔垃圾、不浪费水)和“应该做的事”(种树、回收利用),还要适当发挥,语句通顺,不少于50词。解题时先梳理导图每个图标的含义,再围绕环保主题组织“应该/不应该做的事”的内容,确保覆盖所有信息,符合字数要求。
【解析】
首先解读导图图标:①禁止开车→不应该过多开车,短途出行可选步行或骑车;②乱扔垃圾→不应该随地乱扔垃圾;③手捧水滴→不应该浪费水,如刷牙时关水龙头;④种树→应该多种树净化空气;⑤回收标志→应该回收物品再利用;⑥省略号可补充其他环保做法。将这些内容用连贯的英语句子串联,形成符合要求的短文。
【答案】
Protect our Earth
The Earth is our home. We all should love and protect it. To protect the Earth, we shouldn't drive too much. When you go to some nearby places, you can choose to ride a bike or walk. We shouldn't litter everywhere, or the environment will be messy and dirty. Water is useful in our daily life, so we shouldn't waste water. You can turn off the tap when you brush your teeth. Then what should we do? We should plant more trees to keep the air clean. We should learn to recycle things to make new things. Let's take action together. Our Earth will be more beautiful.
【知识点】
英语书面表达;环保主题写作
【点评】
本题结合环保主题考查七年级学生的英语书面表达能力,要求结合图片信息完成写作,既考查英语语言运用能力,又渗透环保意识,符合期末检测的考查方向。
【难度系数】
0.6