八 书面表达。(6分)
尊老、敬老、爱老、助老是中华民族的传统美德。如今,人口老龄化现象加剧,关爱老人刻不容缓。请根据以下提示写一篇题为“Caring for the old”的短文。
要求:1. 必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥;2. 表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范,词数60左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。

Caring for the old
Nowadays, it’s common in our daily life that people don’t pay enough attention to the old. As a result,
most of the old live alone and feel lonely. What's more, they are weak and get sick easily. So we should do something to take care of them.
On the one hand, I think young people should respect the old. They must spend more time looking after the old. Children should chat with their parents and grandparents more often. And they should help them do some chores.
On the other hand, the government should build more old people's homes and provide good medical care for the old. In short, all of us should care for the old and treat them patiently.
答案:示例:
Caring for the old
Nowadays, it's common in our daily life that people don't pay enough attention to the old. As a result, most of the old live alone and feel lonely. What's more, they are weak and get sick easily. So we should do something to take care of them.
On the one hand, I think young people should respect the old. They must spend more time looking after the old. Children should chat with their parents and grandparents more often. And they should help them do some chores.
On the other hand, the government should build more old people's homes and provide good medical care for the old.
In short, all of us should care for the old and treat them patiently.
解析:
【分析】
首先承接开头的内容,点明老人因缺乏关注出现孤独、虚弱的现状;接着从年轻人和政府两个主体出发,分别阐述关爱老人的具体做法:年轻人需尊重、照顾、陪伴老人,政府应建设养老院、提供医疗服务;最后总结呼吁大家共同关爱老人,确保涵盖所有提示信息,行文连贯,符合词数要求。
【解析】
先承接开头的问题,点明老人的现状:“most of the old live alone and feel lonely. What's more, they are weak and get sick easily.”;再分两部分展开:第一部分说明年轻人的做法,如尊重老人、花时间照顾和陪伴老人;第二部分说明政府的做法,如建设养老院、提供医疗服务;最后总结呼吁大家共同关爱老人,将所有提示信息自然融入,语言通顺,符合词数要求。
【答案】
Caring for the old
Nowadays, it's common in our daily life that people don't pay enough attention to the old. As a result, most of the old live alone and feel lonely. What's more, they are weak and get sick easily. So we should do something to take care of them.
On the one hand, I think young people should respect the old. They must spend more time looking after the old. Children should chat with their parents and grandparents more often. And they should help them do some chores.
On the other hand, the government should build more old people's homes and provide good medical care for the old.
In short, all of us should care for the old and treat them patiently.
【知识点】
英语书面表达;主题写作
【点评】
范文紧扣“关爱老人”主题,完整覆盖所有提示信息,结构清晰,逻辑连贯,语言表达自然流畅,符合书面表达的要求。
【难度系数】
0.5