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假设你是李雷,请你根据以下问题写一篇英语短文来介绍你的爱好。
答案:My Hobbies
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Lei. I have many great hobbies in my free time.
My favourite hobby is reading. I read books for half an hour every evening before going to bed. I can learn a lot of new things from books, and they bring me much joy. I also love sports. I often play basketball with my classmates after school. It makes me strong and energetic. Drawing is my hobby too, I draw pictures of the flowers and the park near my home every weekend.
All my hobbies make my life colourful. I really love them.
解析:
【分析】首先明确写作要求:以李雷的身份,用英语写一篇介绍自己爱好的短文,需包含自我介绍、具体爱好及相关细节、爱好的意义。写作思路:1. 开头:打招呼并介绍自己,点明有爱好;2. 主体:分述2-3个爱好,每个爱好要写具体的活动内容和带来的好处;3. 结尾:总结爱好对生活的影响,表达对爱好的喜爱。
【解析】按照写作思路,具体写作步骤:1. 开篇:Hello, everyone! I'm Li Lei. I have many great hobbies in my free time. 2. 主体:依次介绍阅读(每天睡前读半小时,能学新知识、带来快乐)、运动(放学后和同学打篮球,让自己强壮有活力)、画画(周末画家附近的花和公园);3. 结尾:All my hobbies make my life colourful. I really love them.
【答案】My Hobbies
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Lei. I have many great hobbies in my free time.
My favourite hobby is reading. I read books for half an hour every evening before going to bed. I can learn a lot of new things from books, and they bring me much joy. I also love sports. I often play basketball with my classmates after school. It makes me strong and energetic. Drawing is my hobby too, I draw pictures of the flowers and the park near my home every weekend.
All my hobbies make my life colourful. I really love them.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、介绍类短文
【点评】该短文结构清晰,内容具体充实,围绕爱好展开,每个爱好都有细节支撑,语言通顺自然,符合写作任务要求,能很好地完成介绍爱好的表达。
【难度系数】0.6
1. What is your favourite hobby?
2. Why do you have this hobby?
3. What do you think of your hobby?
[思路点拨]
① 时态:一般现在时和一般过去时。② 人称:以第一人称为主。③ 描述你的爱好是什么、你是如何培养爱好的以及你的爱好给你带来了什么好处。
[写作提纲]

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答案:One possible version:
Playing football is my favourite hobby. It plays an important role in my life.
I started to play with the ball at the age of four and I thought it was very interesting. When I went to primary school, I began to learn to play football in a team. Now it is my favourite hobby.
Playing football not only helps me keep fit, but also brings me lots of fun. Also, I make friends with others by playing football with them.
解析:
【分析】首先明确题目要求:围绕“我的爱好”写短文,需回答三个指定问题,分三段完成,时态结合一般现在时和一般过去时,以第一人称叙述。第一步,确定具体爱好(如踢足球);第一段对应“爱好是什么、为什么有这个爱好”,点明爱好并说明其重要性;第二段对应“如何培养爱好”,讲述接触和学习爱好的经历;第三段对应“爱好的好处”,说明对自己的积极影响。
【解析】按照写作提纲分三段完成:第一段点明爱好是踢足球,说明它在生活中很重要;第二段讲述四岁开始玩球,小学时在球队学习踢足球的经历;第三段说明踢足球的好处,包括健身、带来乐趣、结交朋友。
【答案】One possible version:
Playing football is my favourite hobby. It plays an important role in my life.
I started to play with the ball at the age of four and I thought it was very interesting. When I went to primary school, I began to learn to play football in a team. Now it is my favourite hobby.
Playing football not only helps me keep fit, but also brings me lots of fun. Also, I make friends with others by playing football with them.
【知识点】英语写作、时态运用、要点整合
【点评】本题为初中英语要点式写作题,要求根据给定提纲和问题完成短文,结构清晰,考查学生的英语表达能力和要点梳理能力,符合初中英语写作的考查要求。
【难度系数】0.5