素材积累
[开头句]
1. Chinese calligraphy and painting are great treasures of art. (主题引入)
2. I have a special hobby—practising calligraphy and painting. (爱好介绍)
[中间句]
1. While practising calligraphy, I have also learnt more about Chinese characters. (学习经历)
2. Calligraphy is now one of my hobbies that help me relax. (爱好作用)
[结尾句]
1. I will keep learning traditional art and fall in love with our culture. (个人决心)
2. In short, art makes our lives richer. (价值归纳)
[名言警句]
1. The brush carries culture, and the ink shows charm. 笔载文脉,墨显风华。
2. A single brushstroke can convey a thousand emotions. 一笔一画,皆藏千情。
3. Painting is not only a kind of skill but also a kind of silent charm. 绘画不仅是一种技艺,更是一种无声的魅力。
写作演练
英语课上,老师让同学们通过查询百科全书(encyclopedia)写一篇英语短文,介绍一位名人。假如你对巴勃罗·毕加索(Pablo Picasso)很感兴趣,下面表格中是你在百科全书上找到的有关他的信息。请你根据表格中的提示内容,写一篇英语短文,介绍巴勃罗·毕加索。

[思路点拨]
① 体裁:记叙文。② 时态:以一般过去时为主。③ 人称:以第三人称为主。④ 开头先引入主题,主体部分详细介绍毕加索的生平,最后表达个人观点和理解。
[写作提纲]

[妙笔生花]
I read about Pablo Picasso in an encyclopedia yesterday.
Now let me tell you something about him.
Pablo Picasso was a famous Spanish painter and sculptor.
He was born on October 25th, 1881. He was very interested in drawing when he was a little boy. With the help of his father, he showed great talent for drawing. He created lots of wonderful works of art in his life.
I think Pablo Picasso is a great person.
We all should learn from him and try our best to achieve our dreams.
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解析:
【分析】
本题要求写一篇介绍巴勃罗·毕加索的英语短文,属于人物介绍类记叙文,需以一般过去时为主、第三人称为主写作。解题思路分三步:1. 开头:从百科全书引入,自然引出要介绍毕加索;2. 主体:介绍毕加索的核心信息——身份(西班牙著名画家、雕塑家)、出生时间、童年对绘画的兴趣、父亲的帮助、一生的艺术成就;3. 结尾:表达积极的个人观点,如向他学习、努力实现梦想。写作时需注意语言简洁,符合初中英语写作的规范,避免复杂句式。
【解析】
1. 开头引入:用从百科全书了解到毕加索的内容引出主题,如“I read about Pablo Picasso in an encyclopedia yesterday. Now let me tell you something about him.”
2. 主体介绍:依次说明毕加索的身份、出生时间、童年绘画兴趣、父亲的帮助及艺术成就,使用一般过去时,如“Pablo Picasso was a famous Spanish painter and sculptor. He was born on October 25th, 1881. He was very interested in drawing when he was a little boy. With the help of his father, he showed great talent for drawing. He created lots of wonderful works of art in his life.”
3. 结尾表达观点:结合自身感悟,表达向毕加索学习的决心,如“I think Pablo Picasso is a great person. We all should learn from him and try our best to achieve our dreams.”
【答案】
One possible version:
I read about Pablo Picasso in an encyclopedia yesterday.
Now let me tell you something about him.
Pablo Picasso was a famous Spanish painter and sculptor.
He was born on October 25th, 1881. He was very interested in drawing when he was a little boy. With the help of his father, he showed great talent for drawing. He created lots of wonderful works of art in his life.
I think Pablo Picasso is a great person. We all should learn from him and try our best to achieve our dreams.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、一般过去时运用、人物介绍类短文写作
【点评】
本文严格遵循题目要求,结构清晰,层次分明,开头自然引入主题,主体部分准确呈现毕加索的关键信息,结尾表达积极的个人感悟,时态和人称使用正确,语言简洁规范,符合初中英语写作的标准,是一篇优秀的人物介绍短文。
【难度系数】
0.5