写作演练＞＞
假设你是刘老师，你的学生王圆现在遇到了困难，他写信给你，希望你给他提供一些建议。请你根据下表中的信息给他写一封90词左右的回信。
[思路点拨]
① 体裁：应用文。② 时态：一般现在时。③ 人称：以第二人称为主。④ 首先描述问题，然后提出建议来解决问题，最后表达自己的希望。在写作中要注意表格中的信息，对省略号部分须作适当的补充。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
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答案：One possible version:
Dear Wang Yuan,
Thank you very much for your letter.
You say you have many hobbies and that you are often busy. You can't achieve a balance between schoolwork and your hobbies. Why not choose your hobbies according to the spare time you have?
You think that your parents are strict with you. You feel stressed. You want to get high marks in exams. I think you should talk to your parents about your stress. Make a list of all the homework and do part of it at school.
You are worried about your weight. Perhaps you should eat fewer snacks and do more exercise.
I hope you'll think my advice is worth taking.
Best wishes,
Mr Liu
解析：
【分析】
本题为英语应用文写作题，需以刘老师身份给学生王圆写回信。解题思路：首先明确体裁为书信，时态用一般现在时，人称以第二人称为主；先回应来信，再对应王圆的三个问题（学业与爱好难平衡、父母严格致压力大、体重问题）逐一给出合理建议，最后表达希望，控制在90词左右，补充符合逻辑的内容。
【解析】
按照书信格式，开头称呼并感谢来信；针对王圆的问题分点提建议：1. 学业与爱好平衡：根据空余时间选择爱好；2. 父母严格压力大：与父母沟通，列作业清单在学校完成部分；3. 体重问题：少吃零食、多运动；最后表达希望建议被采纳。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Wang Yuan,
Thank you very much for your letter.
You say you have many hobbies and that you are often busy. You can't achieve a balance between schoolwork and your hobbies. Why not choose your hobbies according to the spare time you have?
You think that your parents are strict with you. You feel stressed. You want to get high marks in exams. I think you should talk to your parents about your stress. Make a list of all the homework and do part of it at school.
You are worried about your weight. Perhaps you should eat fewer snacks and do more exercise.
I hope you'll think my advice is worth taking.
Best wishes,
Mr Liu
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、书信格式、建议类表达
【点评】
本题考查英语书信写作，要求结合学生实际问题给出合理建议，注重格式规范与内容实用性，是常见的英语写作练习题型，能提升学生解决实际问题的写作能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
