八、书面表达。(共 10 分)
假定你是李华,在学校举办的科技文化艺术节活动中,你打算参加以"Science and Technology Have Improved My English"为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据思维导图提示,分享你的学习经历和感悟。词数 80 左右。

Dear friends,
It's my honour to be here to share my English learning experiences with all of you.
I used to be bad at English because I thought English was too difficult for me. I couldn't remember English words. I couldn't understand the teacher's words in class. Now with the help of science and technology, my English has improved a lot. When I meet new words, I can look them up in the e-dictionary. Many apps help me practise my listening and speaking. In addition, I also improve my English by taking online classes. Thanks to science and technology, my English has improved. I believe that science and technology will make learning English more convenient.
Thank you for listening.
答案:One possible version:
Dear friends,
It's my honour to be here to share my English learning experiences with all of you.
I used to be bad at English because I thought English was too difficult for me. I couldn't remember English words. I couldn't understand the teacher's words in class. Now with the help of science and technology, my English has improved a lot. When I meet new words, I can look them up in the e-dictionary. Many apps help me practise my listening and speaking. In addition, I also improve my English by taking online classes. Thanks to science and technology, my English has improved. I believe that science and technology will make learning English more convenient.
Thank you for listening.
解析:
【分析】
拿到这道题首先先明确写作要求:这是一篇主题英语演讲稿,需要完全对应思维导图给出的三个核心模块展开写作。第一步先梳理写作逻辑:首先承接题目已经给出的开篇句,先介绍自己过去学习英语遇到的困难,对应思维导图的Difficulties部分,可以选取记不住单词、跟不上课堂内容这类贴合学生真实情况的困难;第二步过渡到科技助力英语学习,对应Ways模块,把提示的三个路径逐一对应:遇到生词用电子词典查阅、借助各类APP练习英语能力、通过线上课程补足薄弱点,把提示的关键词自然融入行文;最后对应Feelings模块,抒发自己对科技助力学习的感悟,点明科技让英语学习更便捷的核心主旨,全程注意演讲稿语气自然流畅,控制总词数符合要求即可。
【解析】
写作可按照3步完成:
1. 审题定位:体裁为英语演讲文稿,第一人称叙事,时态混合使用一般过去时描述过往学习困境,一般现在时介绍当下的学习方法,现在完成时体现英语水平的提升,需覆盖全部思维导图提示要点。
2. 搭建行文框架:
① 开篇承接给定句,先介绍过去英语学习的难处:比如曾经英语很差,记不住单词,听不懂课堂内容;
② 主体部分介绍科技带来的改变:遇到生词可以用电子词典查阅,各类APP辅助练习听说能力,还可以通过线上课程拓展学习;
③ 结尾抒发感悟,点明科技让英语学习更便捷的核心观点。
3. 加入合适的过渡词(now, in addition, thanks to等)让行文逻辑连贯,调整语句让表达通顺,符合演讲稿的表达习惯,核对词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear friends,
It's my honour to be here to share my English learning experiences with all of you.
I used to be bad at English because I thought English was too difficult for me. I couldn't remember English words. I couldn't understand the teacher's words in class. Now with the help of science and technology, my English has improved a lot. When I meet new words, I can look them up in the e-dictionary. Many apps help me practise my listening and speaking. In addition, I also improve my English by taking online classes. Thanks to science and technology, my English has improved. I believe that science and technology will make learning English more convenient.
Thank you for listening.
【知识点】
英语演讲稿写作,要点式书面表达,时态综合运用
【点评】
本题属于提示类应用文体写作,思维导图已经给出了非常清晰的写作维度和核心关键词,考生不需要自行构思复杂的内容,只需要按照困难、方法、感悟的逻辑串联要点,保证不遗漏提示信息,语句通顺就可以拿到不错的分数,日常练习时可以多积累相关的过渡表达,让演讲稿更有感染力。
【难度系数】
0.7