八、书面表达
假设你是张欣,你的笔友Jack对你们学校上周开展的研学活动很感兴趣。请你给他写一封邮件,谈谈活动过程以及你的感想。须结合以下提示,并进行适当发挥。90词左右,邮件首尾句已给出,不计入总词数。
A study tour to Suzhou
Dear Jack,
I am glad that you are interested in our school's study tour to Suzhou last week.
Yours,
Zhang Xin
答案：One possible version: Dear Jack, I am glad that you are interested in our school's study tour to Suzhou last week. On that day, we began with a Kunqu Opera performance. The performers' graceful movements and beautiful singing voices left a deep impression on me. After that, we visited the Kunqu Opera Museum to learn more about this opera and Chinese culture. We also had a chance to make a fan ourselves and brought it home as a gift. It was really enjoyable. I had fun learning more knowledge through the study tour. Compared with studying in the classroom, it is much more interesting. I also felt closer to my classmates. The tour was an unforgettable experience for all of us. Yours, Zhang Xin
解析：
【解析】
首先明确写作任务是给笔友写邮件介绍苏州研学活动，需结合提示的活动和感受进行拓展。先描述已给的昆曲表演、昆曲博物馆参观活动，可补充如制作昆曲主题折扇这类贴合主题的活动；感受部分在“快乐学习”基础上，可补充增进同学情谊、体验课堂外学习的乐趣等内容，注意语言贴合邮件语境，控制词数在要求范围内，保持行文连贯。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Jack,
I am glad that you are interested in our school's study tour to Suzhou last week.
On that day, we began with a Kunqu Opera performance. The performers' graceful movements and beautiful singing voices left a deep impression on me. After that, we visited the Kunqu Opera Museum to learn more about this opera and Chinese culture. We also had a chance to make a fan ourselves and brought it home as a gift. It was really enjoyable.
I had fun learning more knowledge through the study tour. Compared with studying in the classroom, it is much more interesting. I also felt closer to my classmates. The tour was an unforgettable experience for all of us.
Yours,
Zhang Xin
【知识点】
邮件应用文写作、研学话题写作、英语书面表达
【点评】
本文内容充实，紧扣研学活动主题，合理拓展了活动与感受，语言表达流畅自然，符合邮件的书信格式，能让笔友清晰了解研学活动的内容与作者的收获，很好地完成了写作任务。
【难度系数】
0.6
