[小试身手]
地震幸存者身心都受到了重创,急需社会的帮助。假设你是孙阳,请你写一封 90 词左右的倡议信,呼吁大家为地震幸存者献出爱心。
提示：1. 一些幸存者受伤严重,需尽快手术,但费用高昂,他们支付不起手术费；2. 一些幸存者失去了亲人,感到孤独,独自生活对他们来说很困难；3. 我们可以捐出零花钱,也可以到医院做志愿者,多关心他们……(至少补充一点)；4. 感想。
[思路点拨]
倡议信首先描述需要帮助之人处于哪种困境,其次说明他们需要哪种救助以及如何帮助他们。倡议信应该用一般现在时,人称要用第一、三人称。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
Dear all,
Earthquake survivors need our help!
Earthquake survivors are facing many problems. Some survivors were badly hurt in the earthquake. They need operations as soon as possible, but the operations cost a lot. They are too poor to pay for the operations.
Some survivors lost their family members. They feel lonely. It's hard for them to live alone.
I think we should try our best to help them.
We can donate our pocket money and we can also work as volunteers in the hospital. We should care more about them.
We can visit them more often to make them feel warm.
Many hands make light work.
If all of us give a helping hand, they will live a better life.
Thanks a lot for your help.
Sun Yang
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解析：
【分析】
这是一篇英语倡议信写作题，解题思路如下：1. 首先明确倡议信的标准格式，确定开头称呼、结尾署名的结构；2. 按照思维导图和提示的逻辑顺序，先点明地震幸存者的两类困境：第一类重伤急需手术却无力支付费用，第二类失去亲人长期孤独生活艰难，把给出的零散英文短语自然整合到语句中；3. 接着提出具体的帮扶行动，除了提示的捐零花钱、多探望之外，补充做医院志愿者的合理内容；4. 最后用简短的感想升华主题，控制整体字数符合要求，注意时态匹配场景，描述地震中发生的动作用一般过去时，现状和倡议内容用一般现在时即可。
【解析】
1. 开篇点明倡议主题：用Dear all作为称呼，开门见山直接说明地震幸存者急需帮助，快速切入主题。
2. 阐述幸存者的困境：分两类说明，先写部分幸存者在地震中严重受伤，需要尽快手术，却因为太穷付不起手术费，对应整合badly hurt、need operations、too poor to pay for the operations的要点；再写部分幸存者失去了亲人，感到十分孤独，独自生活对他们而言非常艰难，对应feel lonely的要点。
3. 提出具体帮扶倡议：说明我们可以捐出零花钱，也可以去医院做志愿者，多去探望他们让他们感受到温暖，对应donate our pocket money、visit them more often的要点，补充合理细节让内容更充实。
4. 收尾升华：用谚语“Many hands make light work.”点明团结的意义，呼吁大家伸出援手，最后落款署名Sun Yang，完成整篇倡议信。
【答案】
Dear all,
Earthquake survivors need our help!
Earthquake survivors are facing many problems. Some survivors were badly hurt in the earthquake. They need operations as soon as possible, but the operations cost a lot. They are too poor to pay for the operations. Some survivors lost their family members. They feel lonely. It's hard for them to live alone. I think we should try our best to help them. We can donate our pocket money and we can also work as volunteers in the hospital. We should care more about them. We can visit them more often to make them feel warm. Many hands make light work. If all of us give a helping hand, they will live a better life.
Thanks a lot for your help.
Sun Yang
【知识点】
英语倡议信写作
固定短语搭配
一般现在时应用
【点评】
本题属于基础应用文写作，所有核心要点都通过思维导图明确给出，学生只需要把零散的短语串联成逻辑通顺的完整语句，注意书信格式正确，不遗漏提示要点，适当补充合理细节、最后用简短的感想升华主题，就可以写出合格的倡议信，整体难度不高，适合巩固基础写作能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
