【分析】
首先要仔细审题,明确题目要求:这是一篇面向中学生的英语征文,主题为“Classroom Robot”,需覆盖三个核心要点:1. 分析辅助教学机器人的利与弊(各至少一点);2. 阐述对机器人功能的期待(至少两点);3. 表明是否期待课堂中有这类机器人。
解题思路如下:
1. 确定文章结构:采用三段式结构,逻辑清晰。第一段聚焦利弊分析,第二段讲期待的功能,第三段明确态度。
2. 利弊构思:利的角度从减轻教师负担入手,比如机器人帮忙批改作业,让老师有更多时间优化教学;弊的角度从学生学习自主性出发,比如学生过度依赖机器人直接获取答案,变得懒惰。
3. 功能期待:结合学生学习实际,比如机器人随时收集错题,帮助老师精准掌握学生问题;或者录制课程,方便学生复习重难点。
4. 态度表达:直接明确地表达期待,呼应主题。
写作时要注意使用符合中学生水平的词汇和句型,衔接自然,让文章流畅通顺。
【解析】
第一步:开篇点题,引出辅助教学机器人的利弊。先用“I think there will be advantages as well as disadvantages.”总起,然后分别展开:利的部分用“if the classroom robots can help teachers with some work such as checking homework, our teachers will have more time to think how to teach well.”说明机器人帮老师减负的好处;弊的部分用“But I'm afraid some students may depend too much on the classroom robots. For example, if the classroom robots tell the students answers directly, some students may become lazy.”举例说明学生过度依赖的问题。
第二步:阐述对机器人功能的期待。用“I hope...”引出两个功能:第一个是“help collect our mistakes any time so that our teachers can fully understand what problems we're facing.”,说明收集错题的作用;第二个是“record the lessons and repeat them exactly as the teachers do. In this way, we can go over what we have learned better.”,说明录课复习的好处,用“In this way”衔接,逻辑清晰。
第三步:明确表达态度。用“I look forward to having a classroom robot in my classroom.”直接表明期待,呼应征文主题。
【答案】
What will happen if we have classroom robots in our classrooms?
I think there will be advantages as well as disadvantages. If the classroom robots can help teachers with some work such as checking homework, our teachers will have more time to think how to teach well. But I'm afraid some students may depend too much on the classroom robots. For example, if the classroom robots tell the students answers directly, some students may become lazy.
I hope the classroom robots can help collect our mistakes any time so that our teachers can fully understand what problems we're facing. I also hope that they can record the lessons and repeat them exactly as the teachers do. In this way, we can go over what we have learned better.
I look forward to having a classroom robot in my classroom.
【知识点】
1. 英语情景作文写作
2. 议论文结构搭建
3. 常用衔接句型运用
【点评】
这篇作文紧扣征文主题,完全覆盖题目要求的所有要点,结构清晰,分段明确。语言表达符合中学生英语水平,用到了such as、so that、in this way等实用衔接短语,使文章逻辑连贯,内容贴合学生课堂实际,真实可信,是一篇优秀的初中英语书面表达范文。
【难度系数】
0.6