假如你的外国朋友想了解中国的传统节日,请根据以下要点并结合自己的实际经历,写一篇短文向他介绍你最喜欢的一个中国传统节日。
【要点】1. 你要介绍的节日是什么?
2. 你和亲朋好友在那天是怎样庆祝这个节日的?
3. 节日之后,你的感触是什么?
【要求】短文必须包含所有提示要点,可适当发挥;文中不得出现真实地名、校名和人名;80 词左右。
Let me tell you something about my favourite traditional Chinese festival.
My favourite traditional Chinese festival is the Dragon Boat Festival. It is one of the most important traditional festivals in China, which has a long history. It falls on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month every year. It is a day to remember Qu Yuan, a great poet.
On this day, We eat zongzi and watch dragon boat races. We also hang Chinese mugwort leaves around the door and carry a special bag with us.
What makes the festival special for me is the dragon boat race.
I took part in the dragon boat race with my friend this year.
The members of the dragon boat team have such great team spirit that everybody tries their best to win the race.
答案:One possible version
Let me tell you something about my favourite traditional Chinese festival.
My favourite traditional Chinese festival is the Dragon Boat Festival. It is one of the most important traditional festivals in China, which has a long history. It falls on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month every year. It is a day to remember Qu Yuan, a great poet. On this day, We eat zongzi and watch dragon boat races. We also hang Chinese mugwort leaves around the door and carry a special bag with us.
What makes the festival special for me is the dragon boat race. I took part in the dragon boat race with my friend this year. The members of the dragon boat team have such great team spirit that everybody tries their best to win the race.
解析:
【分析】首先确定要介绍的中国传统节日,优先选择有具体活动的节日(如端午节),再按照题目要求的三个要点依次展开:1.明确节日名称、时间及纪念意义;2.结合自身经历描述节日庆祝活动;3.表达个人感触,同时注意控制词数,避免出现真实地名、校名和人名,适当发挥内容。
【解析】写作步骤如下:1.开篇点明最喜欢的传统节日是端午节,补充其时间、历史及纪念屈原的意义;2.列举节日庆祝方式(吃粽子、赛龙舟、挂艾草等),加入自身参加赛龙舟的经历;3.表达从赛龙舟中体会到的团队精神,确保覆盖所有要点,语言简洁通顺,词数符合要求。
【答案】One possible version
Let me tell you something about my favourite traditional Chinese festival.
My favourite traditional Chinese festival is the Dragon Boat Festival. It is one of the most important traditional festivals in China, which has a long history. It falls on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month every year. It is a day to remember Qu Yuan, a great poet. On this day, We eat zongzi and watch dragon boat races. We also hang Chinese mugwort leaves around the door and carry a special bag with us.
What makes the festival special for me is the dragon boat race. I took part in the dragon boat race with my friend this year. The members of the dragon boat team have such great team spirit that everybody tries their best to win the race.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、中国传统节日介绍
【点评】短文紧扣题目所有要点,内容完整充实,结合个人经历使感触真实自然,语言流畅,符合80词左右的要求,是一篇优秀的范文,适合学生学习借鉴。
【难度系数】0.6