写作指导
1. 本文是一篇话题作文。
2. 时态为一般现在时。
3. 写作要点已给出,应注意不要遗漏题干提示信息,适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
写作模板

遣词造句
1. 我通常把零花钱花费在零食上。
2. 充分地使用钱确实是重要的。
3. 假如人们需要我的帮助,我将尽力向他们伸出援助之手。
高分范文
I think students should have some pocket money because sometimes we need to buy some necessities and develop the skill in managing money as well.
I usually spend my pocket money on snacks. School things also cost much money. Besides, I often buy my favourite things such as books and CDs.
In my opinion, it is really important to make good use of the money. Above all, making plans is a good idea. In this way, I can think about if I spend the money properly. Secondly, it's necessary to save some money. You don't know when you need money.
If people need my help, I will try to give them a hand.
实战演练
假如在英语课上,老师请你们就“Lucky Money(压岁钱)”这个话题分组进行讨论,但你认为同学们对“Hobbies(爱好)”更感兴趣,建议老师更换话题。请你根据下面的要点和要求,写一篇发言稿,谈一谈你的理由。
【要点】1. Why do you like talking about hobbies?
2. What's your reason for not talking about lucky money?
【要求】1. 发言稿须包括所有要点内容,可适当发挥。
2. 发言稿中不得涉及真实的人名、校名和地名。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
3. 词数:60—80。
I think talking about hobbies is better than talking about lucky money. It is
easy and interesting. Everyone has his or her own hobbies, like playing ball games, listening to music and drawing. Hobbies can bring us pleasure and make us relaxed. We have a lot to say when we talk about our hobbies.
Lucky money, however, isn't a proper topic for us, because it's too personal.
What's more, not all of us can get lucky money. Some may feel unhappy if we talk about it.
So talking about hobbies is really a good choice.
解析:
【分析】
本题为英语发言稿写作题,要求将讨论话题从“压岁钱”更换为“爱好”,需包含两个核心要点:一是喜欢聊爱好的原因,二是不适合聊压岁钱的原因。解题思路为:1. 承接已给开头,阐述聊爱好的优势(简单有趣、人人有爱好可分享、带来快乐放松);2. 说明聊压岁钱的弊端(太私人、并非所有人都有、易让部分人不适);3. 总结观点,确保符合词数、时态(一般现在时)及无真实信息的要求。
【解析】
步骤1:承接开头句,说明聊爱好的好处:It is easy and interesting. Everyone has his or her own hobbies, like playing ball games, listening to music and drawing. Hobbies can bring us pleasure and make us relaxed. We have a lot to say when we talk about our hobbies.
步骤2:阐述不适合聊压岁钱的原因:Lucky money, however, isn't a proper topic for us, because it's too personal. What's more, not all of us can get lucky money. Some may feel unhappy if we talk about it.
步骤3:总结观点:So talking about hobbies is really a good choice.
全程使用一般现在时,涵盖所有要点,词数符合要求,无真实信息。
【答案】
I think talking about hobbies is better than talking about lucky money. It is easy and interesting. Everyone has his or her own hobbies, like playing ball games, listening to music and drawing. Hobbies can bring us pleasure and make us relaxed. We have a lot to say when we talk about our hobbies.
Lucky money, however, isn't a proper topic for us, because it's too personal. What's more, not all of us can get lucky money. Some may feel unhappy if we talk about it.
So talking about hobbies is really a good choice.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、话题理由阐述
【点评】
本文符合发言稿格式,涵盖所有写作要点,逻辑清晰,语言简洁流畅,符合词数要求,准确表达了更换话题的理由,适合初中英语写作练习。
【难度系数】
0.3