经典例题
你的学校将举办时装设计比赛,请根据表格提供的信息,以“My fashion design”为题,写一篇短文。词数70左右。

My fashion design
写作指导
1. 本文是一篇材料作文。
2. 时态为一般现在时。
3. 根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语义连贯。
写作模板

遣词造句
1. 这是我设计的一件女式衬衫。(design for)
2. 一件红色的女士衬衫与一条黑色的短裙是相配的。(go well with)
3. 它们是用皮革做成的。(be made of)
高分范文
My fashion design
Here's my design for a blouse, a skirt and a pair of boots.
The blouse is red. It's made of cotton. I think red looks smart. And a red blouse goes well with a black skirt. The skirt is made of wool. I think it looks clean and feels comfortable. It's very popular with young girls.
There is a pair of boots. They are grey. They're made of leather. The boots are light and cool.
All the girls like them. I hope you love them.
实战演练
请你根据提示,以“At the fashion show”为题,写一篇70词左右的英语短文。
【提示】1. Simon是阳光中学七年级(4)班的一名学生。
2. 他和他的同学正在为希望工程(Project Hope)举行一场时装表演。
3. 他上身穿……
4. 下身穿着一双黑色的皮鞋和一条白色的裤子……
5. ……
At the fashion show
解析:
【分析】
本题为英语材料写作题,要求以“At the fashion show”为题,根据给定提示完成70词左右的短文。解题思路:1. 明确时态为一般现在时;2. 开篇介绍人物Simon的身份、所在学校班级,以及时装秀的目的(为希望工程);3. 描述Simon的穿着(上衣、裤子、鞋子),可结合常用短语丰富内容;4. 收尾点明活动的意义,确保语义连贯、语法正确,符合词数要求。
【解析】
按照写作逻辑分步完成:① 开篇介绍人物与活动:Simon is a student in Class Four, Grade Seven in Sunshine Middle School. He is having a fashion show for Project Hope with his classmates. ② 描述穿着细节:He is wearing a yellow shirt. It's made of cotton. He is wearing a pair of black leather shoes and a pair of white trousers. They match his shirt very well and white matches any other colour. ③ 收尾升华:He looks cool and modern. They hope they can raise a lot of money for Project Hope. 全程使用一般现在时,语言简洁,符合要求。
【答案】
At the fashion show
Simon is a student in Class Four, Grade Seven in Sunshine Middle School. He is having a fashion show for Project Hope with his classmates.
He is wearing a yellow shirt. It's made of cotton. He is wearing a pair of black leather shoes and a pair of white trousers. They match his shirt very well and white matches any other colour. He looks cool and modern.
They hope they can raise a lot of money for Project Hope.
【知识点】
英语材料作文、一般现在时、常用短语运用
【点评】
本题考查初中学生的英语写作能力,要求学生结合提示信息完成短文,需准确运用时态、短语,保证语句通顺、逻辑连贯,是常见的英语写作考查题型。
【难度系数】
0.6