4. The storm lasted for two days.
暴风雨持续了两天。
5. There were pieces of glass and bricks every-
where. 到处都是玻璃碎片和砖块。
6. During the disaster, seven people lost their lives. Over 2,400 houses fell down.
灾害期间,七人遇难。2400多栋房屋倒塌。
7. After the disaster, people began to help each other. Many policemen came to help.
灾后人们开始互相帮助。许多警察来支援。
» 结尾句
1. How terrible the flood is!
这场洪水多么可怕啊!
2. We hope they can live a new happy life soon.
我们希望他们能尽快开始新的幸福生活。
3. If everyone is willing to help people in need, the world will be full of love. 如果每个人都愿意帮助需要帮助的人,世界将充满爱。
思路妙解
[典型例题]
根据下列提示,写一篇80词左右的英语短文。
1. 去年的一个下午,一场台风袭击了我们镇,风强雨大;
2. 我放学后匆忙回家,全身都湿透了;
3. 晚上,电闪雷鸣,雨下了一整夜;
4. 第二天早晨,到处是水;风吹倒了树和房子。台风给我们带来了不幸。
[思路点拨]

高分模板
开头:概述台风的时间和地点
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One afternoon last year, a typhoon hit our town.主体:介绍台风过程、带来的危害
The strong wind started blowing. Big drops of rain began to fall. After school, I went home ②
in a hurry. When I got home, I was all wet. In the evening, it rained
harder and harder. Thunder crashed in the sky. I could hear the wind blowing. I was very afraid. It rained for the whole night. ③
The next morning, there was water everywhere. And we lost lots of trees and houses.结尾:表达不开心的情感
The typhoon brought us a lot of unhappiness.
名师点评
①本文开篇简明扼要地说明了台风发生的时间和地点。
②短语in a hurry生动形象地描述了作者迫切想回家的心情;harder and harder为副词比较级连用,再现了当时天气的恶劣程度,增强了文章的可读性。
③通过具体事例说明台风给人们所造成的影响,增强了逻辑性。
解析:
【分析】本题要求根据给定的台风相关信息(时间、地点、台风发生过程、造成的结果)写一篇80词左右的英语短文。解题思路:1. 开篇直接点明台风的时间(去年一个下午)和地点(我们镇),开门见山;2. 主体部分依次描述台风的具体情况(强风、大雨、电闪雷鸣),结合自己放学后匆忙回家全身湿透的经历,以及台风持续一整夜的情况;3. 结尾说明台风造成的结果(到处是水、树木房屋受损),并表达台风带来的不幸,确保所有要点都覆盖,语言简洁流畅。
【解析】按照写作思路,先开篇点题:One afternoon last year, a typhoon hit our town, with strong wind and heavy rain. 接着写个人经历:After school, I went home in a hurry, and I was all wet when I got home. 再描述台风过程:In the evening, lightning flashed and thunder crashed, and it rained for the whole night. 然后写台风结果:The next morning, there was water everywhere. The strong wind blew down lots of trees and houses. 最后结尾点明情感:The typhoon really brought us a lot of unhappiness.
【答案】One afternoon last year, a typhoon hit our town, with strong wind and heavy rain. After school, I went home in a hurry, and I was all wet when I got home. In the evening, lightning flashed and thunder crashed, and it rained for the whole night. The next morning, there was water everywhere. The strong wind blew down lots of trees and houses. The typhoon really brought us a lot of unhappiness.
【知识点】英语记叙文写作;场景描述;词汇运用
【点评】本文严格覆盖所有给定要点,开篇简明,主体结合个人经历使内容真实,结尾点明情感,语言流畅自然,符合英语写作要求。
【难度系数】0.6