[典型例题]
没有湿地就没有水。湿地与人类的生存、繁衍及发展息息相关。请就此写一篇90词左右的英语演讲稿,谈谈你的看法。要点提示如下:
1. 湿地的重要性;
2. 湿地面临的问题;
3. 保护湿地的措施;
4. 呼吁大家保护湿地,热爱大自然。
[思路点拨]

高分模板
开头:概括演讲的目的和内容
①
Good morning, everyone! Today, I would like to talk to you about the importance of wetlands and how to protect the precious natural resource.
主体:介绍湿地的重要性、面临的问题和保护措施
Wetlands are ②
an important part of the natural world. They
are home to about 40% of the world's plants and animals. They also help make the water clean,
get rid of pollution and prevent floods. They
act like the "kidneys" of the earth.
③
However, wetlands are facing some serious problems. Pollution, human activities and climate change are damaging them.
To protect wetlands, we should make more people realize the importance of wetlands and reduce pollution. The government needs to make laws
to stop harmful activities.
结尾:呼吁大家热爱大自然、保护湿地
As students, we should love nature and protect the wetlands. ④
Let's work hand in hand for a greener, healthier future.That's all. Thank you.
名师点评
①开头问好,引起听众注意。
②使用所学短语介绍湿地的重要性,体现作者优秀的学以致用的能力。
③恰当使用转折词和动词不定式作目的状语,为文章添彩。
④结尾使用高级词汇hand in hand以及比较级,体现了作者深厚的语言功底。
答案:Good morning, everyone! Today, I would like to talk to you about the importance of wetlands and how to protect this precious natural resource.
Wetlands are an important part of the natural world. They are home to plenty of plants and animals. They can make water clean, get rid of pollution and prevent floods, acting as the "kidneys" of the earth.
However, wetlands are facing serious problems now. Pollution and harmful human activities are damaging them. To protect wetlands, we should let more people know their importance, and the government should make laws to stop bad activities.
As students, let's love nature and work hand in hand to protect wetlands for a greener future.
That's all. Thank you.
解析:
【分析】
本题为英语演讲稿写作题,需依据给定思维导图的结构完成创作。解题思路为:第一步,开头用问候语引出演讲主题,明确要谈论湿地的重要性及保护方法;第二步,主体部分依次阐述湿地的重要性(生态价值)、面临的问题(污染、人类活动破坏)、保护措施(提高公众意识、政府立法);第三步,结尾以学生身份呼吁大家保护湿地、热爱自然,总结点题,确保词数约90词,符合演讲稿的正式且易懂的风格。
【解析】
按照演讲稿的标准结构写作:
1. 开头:问候听众,引出演讲主题;
2. 主体:分三点展开,先说明湿地是自然世界的重要组成部分,是动植物家园,能净化水源、防洪等;再转折指出湿地面临污染和人类活动破坏的问题;接着提出保护措施,包括让更多人了解湿地重要性、政府立法制止不良活动;
3. 结尾:以学生身份呼吁大家保护湿地、热爱自然,礼貌收尾。
【答案】
Good morning, everyone! Today, I would like to talk to you about the importance of wetlands and how to protect this precious natural resource.
Wetlands are an important part of the natural world. They are home to plenty of plants and animals. They can make water clean, get rid of pollution and prevent floods, acting as the "kidneys" of the earth.
However, wetlands are facing serious problems now. Pollution and harmful human activities are damaging them. To protect wetlands, we should let more people know their importance, and the government should make laws to stop bad activities.
As students, let's love nature and work hand in hand to protect wetlands for a greener future.
That's all. Thank you.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、湿地英语表达、英语写作结构
【点评】
范文结构清晰,严格覆盖所有要点,语言流畅自然,符合演讲稿的格式要求,用词恰当准确,是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6