B.写作。(满分15分)
根据所给提示,以“My school life”为题写一篇 70 词左右的短文,文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
【提示】我叫 Sandy,今年14岁,在济川中学读书。我的学校很大、很漂亮,在这所学校我非常开心。
6:15 a. m.
起床
8 a. m.
上第一节课,我喜欢所有的课⋯⋯
Then
操场上做早操
After class
和 朋 友 一 起玩……
6:40 a. m.
吃早饭…
After breakfast
经常和同学一起读英语
我喜欢我的学校……
My school life
My name is Sandy.
答案:One possible version
My school life
My name is Sandy. I'm 14. I study at Jichuan Middle School. My school is very big and beautiful. I am very happy in this school.
I usually get up at 6:15 a. m. Then I do morning exercises in the playground. At 6:40 a. m., I have breakfast. In the dining hall, I can see many students and teachers. After breakfast, I often read English with my classmates.
We have 8 classes every day. The first class begins at 8 a. m. I like all my lessons because my teachers can make their classes interesting. My favourite subject is English. After class, I play with my friends. We play basketball, football and volleyball.
I like all my lessons, my friends and my teachers. I love my school.
解析:
【分析】
本题为英语话题写作题,要求以“My school life”为题,结合给定提示及时间节点完成70词左右的短文,开头已给出。解题思路:1. 承接给定开头,补充年龄、就读学校及学校特点、个人感受;2. 按时间顺序梳理提示中的活动:6:15起床→操场做早操→6:40吃早饭→早饭后读英语→8点第一节课(说明喜欢课程的原因)→课后与朋友玩耍;3. 结尾表达对学校的喜爱,确保覆盖所有提示点,语句通顺,符合词数要求。
【解析】
I'm 14. I study at Jichuan Middle School. My school is very big and beautiful. I am very happy here. I usually get up at 6:15 a.m. Then I do morning exercises in the playground. At 6:40 a.m., I have breakfast. After breakfast, I often read English with my classmates. The first class begins at 8 a.m. I like all my lessons because they are interesting. After class, I play with my friends. I love my school.
【答案】
My school life
My name is Sandy. I'm 14. I study at Jichuan Middle School. My school is very big and beautiful. I am very happy in this school.
I usually get up at 6:15 a. m. Then I do morning exercises in the playground. At 6:40 a. m., I have breakfast. In the dining hall, I can see many students and teachers. After breakfast, I often read English with my classmates.
We have 8 classes every day. The first class begins at 8 a. m. I like all my lessons because my teachers can make their classes interesting. My favourite subject is English. After class, I play with my friends. We play basketball, football and volleyball.
I like all my lessons, my friends and my teachers. I love my school.
【知识点】
英语话题写作、时间顺序表达
【点评】
该范文紧扣题目要求,完整覆盖所有提示信息,以时间为线索串联校园生活片段,语句通顺自然,情感表达真挚,符合初中英语写作的规范,是一篇优秀的参考范文。
【难度系数】
0.6