最近,阳光中学英文校报正在举行以“My school life”为题的征文活动。假如你是阳光中学七年级的新生李敏,请根据下面表格中的内容,介绍一下你自己的学校生活。

【要求】1. 文章应包括所有提示内容,要求语句通顺、意思连贯,省略号处可适当发挥。
2. 词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My school life
I am Li Min, a new student at Sunshine Middle School. My school is not very big, but it’s very beautiful. Let me tell you something about my school life here.
Lessons start at 8 a. m. every day and we have all kinds of subjects. I like History best because it's very interesting and I can learn a lot about the world.
I like reading so I often borrow books from the school library.
I also like sport. I'm a member of the school basketball team.
We practise playing basketball on Friday afternoons.
My classmates are all kind and we always help each other.
I feel happy at school and I enjoy my school life.
答案:One possible version
My school life
I am Li Min, a new student at Sunshine Middle School.
My school is not very big, but it's very beautiful. Let me tell you something about my school life here.
Lessons start at 8 a. m. every day and we have all kinds of subjects. I like History best because it's very interesting and I can learn a lot about the world.
I like reading so I often borrow books from the school library. I also like sport. I'm a member of the school basketball team. We practise playing basketball on Friday afternoons.
My classmates are all kind and we always help each other.
I feel happy at school and I enjoy my school life.
解析:
【分析】
这是一道英语应用文写作题,要求以七年级新生李敏的身份介绍学校生活,需覆盖表格中学习、活动、同学、感受的所有内容,适当发挥省略部分,语句通顺、意思连贯,词数80左右且开头已给出。解题思路:1. 按“学习→活动→同学→感受”的逻辑梳理要点,对应表格内容;2. 学习部分补充喜欢历史的原因(如有趣、能了解世界);3. 活动部分明确借书的来源、篮球队的练习时间;4. 同学部分体现友善互助的特点;5. 感受部分补充自己对学校生活的喜爱;6. 采用一般现在时,确保语句连贯,符合词数要求。
【解析】
首先承接已给开头,依次展开内容:1. 学习方面:说明上课时间为早上8点,科目多样,点明最喜欢历史并补充原因(it's very interesting and I can learn a lot about the world);2. 活动方面:说明喜欢读书,常从学校图书馆借书,是校篮球队成员,周五下午练习;3. 同学方面:表达同学友善,互相帮助;4. 感受方面:总结自己在学校很开心,享受学校生活。全程使用一般现在时,用词符合七年级英语水平,语句连贯自然。
【答案】
My school life
I am Li Min, a new student at Sunshine Middle School.
My school is not very big, but it's very beautiful. Let me tell you something about my school life here.
Lessons start at 8 a. m. every day and we have all kinds of subjects. I like History best because it's very interesting and I can learn a lot about the world.
I like reading so I often borrow books from the school library. I also like sport. I'm a member of the school basketball team. We practise playing basketball on Friday afternoons.
My classmates are all kind and we always help each other.
I feel happy at school and I enjoy my school life.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、学校生活话题表达
【点评】
本文完全覆盖题目要求的所有要点,语句通顺、意思连贯,适当发挥了省略部分,符合七年级学生的英语写作水平,是一篇符合要求的优秀征文。
【难度系数】
0.6