经典例题
学校正在举办主题为“My pocket money”的英语征文活动，请你根据下面的要点写一篇短文，谈谈中学生应如何使用自己的零花钱。
【要点】1.中学生是否应该有零花钱？
2.你平时是如何使用零花钱的？
3.怎样更好地管理你的零花钱？
【要求】1.表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯。
2.必须包括要点中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥。
3.80词左右。
4.不得使用真实的姓名、校名和地名等。
答案：My pocket money
I think middle school students should have pocket money, because it helps us learn to plan things by ourselves.
I usually spend my pocket money on study tools like pens and notebooks, and sometimes I buy small snacks after school.
To manage my pocket money better, I will save most of it in my money box, and never waste money on useless things. I also want to give a little of it to help children in need.
解析：
【分析】本题为英语征文写作任务，主题是“My pocket money”，需围绕三个指定要点展开：一是明确中学生是否应有零花钱并说明理由；二是介绍自己平时使用零花钱的方式；三是提出更好管理零花钱的方法。写作时需满足表达清晰、语法正确、上下文连贯、80词左右、无真实信息的要求。解题时应先开篇亮明观点（中学生应有零花钱及原因），再叙述个人使用情况，最后说明管理方法，确保所有要点都被覆盖，语言贴合初中英语水平。
【解析】根据题目要求，结合要点写出符合规范的短文如下：
My pocket money
I think middle school students should have pocket money, because it helps us learn to plan things by ourselves.
I usually spend my pocket money on study tools like pens and notebooks, and sometimes I buy small snacks after school.
To manage my pocket money better, I will save most of it in my money box, and never waste money on useless things. I also want to give a little of it to help children in need.
【答案】My pocket money
I think middle school students should have pocket money, because it helps us learn to plan things by ourselves.
I usually spend my pocket money on study tools like pens and notebooks, and sometimes I buy small snacks after school.
To manage my pocket money better, I will save most of it in my money box, and never waste money on useless things. I also want to give a little of it to help children in need.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、要点式作文写作、英语语句连贯表达
【点评】本文紧扣征文主题，完整覆盖所有要求要点，结构清晰（观点阐述-个人使用情况-管理方法），语言简洁通顺，符合初中英语写作的语法和词数要求，是一篇符合标准的优秀范文。
【难度系数】0.6
