健康饮食对青少年的身体健康至关重要,不良的饮食习惯不利于青少年的成长。假设你是李华,你校的英文报社正在举行征文活动,面向全校学生征稿,主题为“饮食与健康”,请你写一篇英语短文向报社投稿。
【内容】1. 介绍一些学生的不良饮食习惯及其产生的影响。
2. 对如何保持健康提出你的建议,至少两点。
【要求】1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称等信息。
2. 语句连贯。词数70左右,文章开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
Today, many students have some bad eating habits.
答案:Today, many students have some bad eating habits. Many of them love eating all kinds of junk food, and some even do not have breakfast every day. These bad habits make them get fat easily and feel sleepy or tired in class.
To keep healthy, we should have good eating habits. First, we need to eat more fresh vegetables and fruit every day. Second, we must have meals on time and try not to eat too much junk food. Good eating habits help us grow healthily.
解析:
【分析】本题为英语应用文写作题,主题为“饮食与健康”,要求结合给定开头,先介绍学生的不良饮食习惯及其影响,再提出至少两点健康饮食建议,词数约70,不得出现真实信息。解题思路:1. 承接开头,列举具体不良饮食习惯(如吃垃圾食品、不吃早饭);2. 说明这些习惯带来的影响(易发胖、上课困倦疲惫);3. 提出两点可行的健康饮食建议(多吃新鲜果蔬、按时吃饭少吃垃圾食品);4. 收尾点明健康饮食习惯的益处,确保语句连贯、符合要求。
【解析】按照上述思路组织语言,确保符合征文要求,内容如下:
Today, many students have some bad eating habits. Many of them love eating all kinds of junk food, and some even do not have breakfast every day. These bad habits make them get fat easily and feel sleepy or tired in class.
To keep healthy, we should have good eating habits. First, we need to eat more fresh vegetables and fruit every day. Second, we must have meals on time and try not to eat too much junk food. Good eating habits help us grow healthily.
【答案】Today, many students have some bad eating habits. Many of them love eating all kinds of junk food, and some even do not have breakfast every day. These bad habits make them get fat easily and feel sleepy or tired in class.
To keep healthy, we should have good eating habits. First, we need to eat more fresh vegetables and fruit every day. Second, we must have meals on time and try not to eat too much junk food. Good eating habits help us grow healthily.
【知识点】英语应用文写作;健康饮食话题表达
【点评】本文紧扣主题,结构清晰,先阐述不良饮食习惯及影响,再提出两点具体可行的健康建议,语句连贯,符合征文的内容、格式及词数要求,无真实信息,是一篇合格的英语征文。
【难度系数】0.5