单元主题
本单元我们学习了日期的表达方式,学会了如何描述在某个特殊日子里为长辈所做的事情,并能够表达对长辈的爱与关怀。请运用本单元所学知识,写一篇英文短文,记录你为妈妈庆祝生日的经过。
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范文欣赏
Last Sunday was May 10th. It was my mother’s 40th birthday. I got up early that day. First, I made a beautiful handmade thank-you card for her. Then I went to the flower shop and bought some roses. In the evening, our family had a big birthday party. Dad and I cooked her favourite dishes together. He also bought a big birthday cake. I gave Mum the card and flowers. She was very surprised. We sang the birthday song and she made a wish before blowing out the candles.
It was a really wonderful day. My mother was very happy, and so was I. I love my mother and I hope she can be happy every day.
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My mother's birthday
My mother's birthday is on October 12th. Last year, we had a warm birthday party for her.
I got up very early that day. First, I helped my father clean the whole house, and we put many pretty pink balloons in the living room. Then I made a hand-drawn thank-you card for my mother as my special gift. My father and I also cooked a lot of her favourite dishes, like sweet and sour fish and tomato egg soup. When my mother came back home from work, she was so surprised. We sang the birthday song for her, and she made a wish before blowing out the candles on the cream cake.
It was a really wonderful day. My mother said it was the sweetest birthday she had ever had. I love my mother and I hope she can be happy every day.
解析:
本次写作围绕“为妈妈庆祝生日”的主题展开,贴合本单元所学的日期表达、描述过去发生事件的知识点,可按照指定的三段式结构完成写作:1. 开篇点明妈妈生日的具体日期,用单元所学的日期表达句式交代事件背景;2. 用First、Then等连接词,按时间顺序梳理当天你和家人为妈妈庆生的具体活动,使用一般过去时描述已经发生的事件,让叙事逻辑清晰通顺;3. 结尾总结当天的感受,自然抒发对妈妈的爱与美好祝愿,符合六年级的写作难度要求。
小试身手
下图是楠楠在祖父八十寿诞那天拍摄的照片。假设你是楠楠,请根据以下提示,写一篇不少于60词的英文短文记录下祖父寿诞那天的活动。
提示:上周六是祖父的80岁生日。楠楠与堂兄弟姐妹一起为祖父贺寿。堂哥Jack和他的父母为祖父买了新的智能手机与电视。楠楠则以传统寿桃献礼。寿宴上,堂妹Lucy演唱了《茉莉花》,堂姐Ruby弹钢琴伴奏。堂姐Cathy为祖父做了美味又健康的菜肴。大家都很开心。

Last Saturday was the thirteenth of June. It was my grandpa's eightieth birthday. We had a big party for Grandpa at home. All my family members came to the party. Before the party, we prepared a lot of gifts. Jack and his parents bought a new smartphone and a new TV for Grandpa. As for me, I chose the birthday peach for my grandpa. At the party, Ruby and Lucy gave a performance. Lucy sang the beautiful song Jasmine Flower and Ruby played the piano. Cathy was great too. She cared about Grandpa's health. She cooked delicious and healthy dishes for Grandpa.
Grandpa was happy on his birthday. And we all had a great time together.
答案:Last Saturday was the thirteenth of June. It was my grandpa's eightieth birthday. We had a big party for Grandpa at home. All my family members came to the party. Before the party, we prepared a lot of gifts. Jack and his parents bought a new smartphone and a new TV for Grandpa. As for me, I chose the birthday peach for my grandpa. At the party, Ruby and Lucy gave a performance. Lucy sang the beautiful song Jasmine Flower and Ruby played the piano. Cathy was great too. She cared about Grandpa's health. She cooked delicious and healthy dishes for Grandpa.
Grandpa was happy on his birthday. And we all had a great time together.