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假设你是David,你校育才中学正在进行以“My school”为主题的征文活动。请你根据要点提示的内容,写一篇70词左右的英语短文介绍你的学校。
要点:
1. What is your school like?
2. What are your favourite places? Why?
3. How do you find your school?
① 时态:一般现在时。② 人称:以第一人称为主。③ 首先介绍学校概况,接着描述自己喜欢的场所和具体原因,最后对学校进行评价。
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答案:My school
I am David, a Grade 7 student at Yucai Middle School. My school is big and beautiful. There are three classroom buildings, a modern library and a large playground in it.
My favourite places are the library and the playground. I love the library best because it has all kinds of books for me to read after class. And I often play badminton with my classmates on the playground to relax.
My school is so nice that I always have a great time here. I love my school very much.
解析:
【分析】
本题是七年级英语写作题,要求以David的身份完成“My school”主题短文,需遵循三个核心要点:介绍学校概况、说明喜欢的场所及原因、评价学校。解题思路:① 确定人称(第一人称)和时态(一般现在时);② 按三段结构对应要点:第一段介绍身份、学校名称及基本设施;第二段阐述喜欢的场所并说明原因;第三段总结对学校的评价;③ 控制词数在70左右,使用简单句,确保要点全覆盖。
【解析】
写作步骤如下:
1. 第一段:开篇点明身份(I am David, a Grade 7 student...),说明学校名称(Yucai Middle School),描述学校整体特点(big and beautiful),列举核心设施(three classroom buildings, a modern library, a large playground),完成学校概况介绍。
2. 第二段:明确最喜欢的场所(the library and the playground),分别说明原因:图书馆有各类书籍可供课后阅读,操场可和同学打羽毛球放松,完成喜欢的场所及原因描述。
3. 第三段:总结评价学校(so nice, have a great time),表达对学校的喜爱,完成学校评价。
4. 检查:确保时态为一般现在时,要点全部覆盖,语句通顺,词数符合要求。
【答案】
My school
I am David, a Grade 7 student at Yucai Middle School. My school is big and beautiful. There are three classroom buildings, a modern library and a large playground in it.
My favourite places are the library and the playground. I love the library best because it has all kinds of books for me to read after class. And I often play badminton with my classmates on the playground to relax.
My school is so nice that I always have a great time here. I love my school very much.
【知识点】
英语写作、一般现在时运用、校园话题表达
【点评】
短文结构清晰,严格对应题目要点,语言简单通顺,符合七年级学生的英语水平,准确表达了对学校的喜爱,是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.4