七、书面表达(本题满分25分)
人生之路并非一帆风顺,挫折与挑战时常相伴左右,而永不放弃的精神是帮助我们穿越迷茫、奔赴成长的珍贵力量。你校校刊英语专栏正在开展以“Never Give Up”为题的征文活动,请你用英语写一篇短文,向专栏投稿。
内容要点:
1. 阐述永不放弃的重要性;
2. 讲述你的相关经历;
3. 分享你的建议。
要求:
1. 词数90左右;
2. 条理清晰、内容完整、语句通顺;
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名与校名。
Never Give Up
答案:One possible version:
Never Give Up
Life is never always smooth. We may meet difficulties and failures from time to time. In my opinion, the spirit of never giving up is extremely important. It offers us courage to face challenges and helps us keep moving forward on the way to growth.
Last term, I fell behind in my English study and nearly lost confidence. Luckily, my deskmate set a good example for me.
He kept practising patiently even when he met difficulties.
Encouraged by him, I stuck to listening and reading every day.
Finally, I made much progress in English.
As students, we should never give up easily. When we fail, we can learn from our mistakes and keep trying. Persistence will finally lead us to success.
解析:
【分析】
首先审题明确主题为“Never Give Up”,需包含三个内容要点:阐述永不放弃的重要性、讲述相关经历、分享建议,词数90左右且不能出现真实信息。构思时,第一段结合生活中挫折的普遍性点明永不放弃的重要性;第二段用个人英语学习遇困后坚持进步的事例支撑观点;第三段总结并给出建议,鼓励大家坚持。写作时用简单易懂的英语,确保语句通顺、条理清晰。
【解析】
按照构思的结构,依次完成三个要点的写作:第一段阐述永不放弃对成长的重要性;第二段讲述自己英语学习落后,受同桌鼓励后坚持练习最终进步的经历;第三段分享建议,鼓励大家遇到挫折不放弃,从错误中学习,坚持终将成功。
【答案】
One possible version:
Never Give Up
Life is never always smooth. We may meet difficulties and failures from time to time. In my opinion, the spirit of never giving up is extremely important. It offers us courage to face challenges and helps us keep moving forward on the way to growth.
Last term, I fell behind in my English study and nearly lost confidence. Luckily, my deskmate set a good example for me. He kept practising patiently even when he met difficulties. Encouraged by him, I stuck to listening and reading every day. Finally, I made much progress in English.
As students, we should never give up easily. When we fail, we can learn from our mistakes and keep trying. Persistence will finally lead us to success.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、话题作文写作
【点评】
该范文紧扣主题,结构清晰,完整覆盖题目要求的所有内容要点,以个人真实感的事例支撑观点,语言简洁流畅,符合词数要求,是一篇符合征文要求的优秀短文。
【难度系数】
0.6