七、书面表达（本题满分25分）
［2025南通市启东市期末改编］悦纳自我，方能拥有愉悦生活。你是否和斯蒂芬·霍金（Stephen Hawking）一样在面对困难时不放弃、勇毅前行？你是否和谭盾一样为实现音乐梦想而孜孜以求？你是否和奥黛丽·赫本（Audrey Hepburn）一样心怀悲悯，以善意传递温暖？请你结合自身实际，以“I’m Proud of Myself”为题，用英语写一篇短文。
内容包括：1. What makes you proud of yourself? 2. What did you once do that made you proud of yourself? 3. What will you do to improve yourself in the future?
注意：1. 词数90左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中请勿提及真实姓名、校名、地名等信息。
I’m Proud of Myself
Everyone is unique in the world. We should be proud that we each have our own good qualities or talents. And I’m proud that
答案：One possible version：
I’m Proud of Myself
Everyone is unique in the world. We should be proud that we each have our own good qualities or talents. And I’m proud that I’m ready to help others like Audrey Hepburn and I never give up when facing difficulties, just like Stephen Hawking.
Once my friend was sad about her bad exam grades. I listened to her patiently and cheered her up with kind words. I used to be weak in PE, but I kept practising running every day and finally made great progress.
In the future, I will keep helping others and working hard on my study. I will be more confident and face all kinds of difficulties bravely to become a better person.
Be proud of ourselves and accept what we already have, and we’ll become happier and healthier.
解析：
【分析】
本次写作任务为英语话题书面表达，要求以“I’m Proud of Myself”为题，需涵盖三个核心内容：①让自己骄傲的品质；②具体的骄傲事例；③未来的改进方向。写作时需结合题目提及的名人精神（霍金的坚持、赫本的善意），联系自身实际，注意词数要求，避免提及真实个人信息，确保内容连贯、要点齐全。
【解析】
写作分三步落实要点：1. 承接已给开头，点明自身骄傲的品质（乐于助人、面对困难不放弃），呼应题目给出的名人榜样；2. 列举具体事例：朋友考试失利时耐心安慰（体现善意），自己体育薄弱时坚持练习取得进步（体现坚持）；3. 明确未来计划：继续帮助他人、努力学习，勇敢面对困难，最后升华主题传递悦纳自我的理念，符合词数要求。
【答案】
I’m Proud of Myself
Everyone is unique in the world. We should be proud that we each have our own good qualities or talents. And I’m proud that I’m ready to help others like Audrey Hepburn and I never give up when facing difficulties, just like Stephen Hawking.
Once my friend was sad about her bad exam grades. I listened to her patiently and cheered her up with kind words. I used to be weak in PE, but I kept practising running every day and finally made great progress.
In the future, I will keep helping others and working hard on my study. I will be more confident and face all kinds of difficulties bravely to become a better person.
Be proud of ourselves and accept what we already have, and we’ll become happier and healthier.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、话题写作、要点写作
【点评】
本篇范文紧扣题目要求的三个内容要点，结合题目提及的名人精神作为榜样，内容具体真实，语言流畅自然，结构清晰，符合词数要求，传递了积极向上的价值观，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文，适合学生学习参考。
【难度系数】
0.6
