实战演练
假如在英语课上,老师请你们就“Lucky Money(压岁钱)”这个话题分组进行讨论,但你认为同学们对“Hobbies(爱好)”更感兴趣,建议老师更换话题。请你根据下面的提示和要求,写一篇发言稿,谈一谈你的理由。
【提示】1. Why do you like talking about hobbies?
2. What's your reasons for not talking about lucky money?
【要求】1. 发言稿须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥。
2. 发言稿中不得涉及真实的人名、校名和地名。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
3. 词数:60—80。
I think talking about hobbies is better than talking about lucky money. It is
答案:One possible version
I think talking about hobbies is better than talking about lucky money. It is easy and interesting. Everyone has his own hobbies, such as playing ball games, listening to music and drawing. They can bring us pleasure and make us relaxed. We have a lot to say when we talk about hobbies.
Lucky money, however, isn't a proper topic for us, because it's too personal. What's more, not all of us can get lucky money. Some may feel unhappy if we talk about it.
So talking about hobbies is really a good choice.
解析:
【分析】
首先明确发言稿的结构,开头已给出,需紧扣两个提示点展开:一是阐述喜欢“爱好”话题的理由,可从人人有爱好、话题易聊、能带来快乐放松等角度说明;二是说明不选“压岁钱”话题的原因,可从话题太私人、并非人人都能获得压岁钱、会让部分人不适等角度阐述;最后总结选爱好话题的合理性,同时控制词数在60-80,符合发言稿语气,不涉及真实信息。
【解析】
1. 承接开头,说明爱好话题的优势:It is easy and interesting. Everyone has his own hobbies, such as playing ball games, listening to music and drawing. They can bring us pleasure and make us relaxed. We have a lot to say when we talk about hobbies.
2. 阐述不选压岁钱话题的理由:Lucky money, however, isn't a proper topic for us, because it's too personal. What's more, not all of us can get lucky money. Some may feel unhappy if we talk about it.
3. 总结观点:So talking about hobbies is really a good choice.
【答案】
One possible version
I think talking about hobbies is better than talking about lucky money. It is easy and interesting. Everyone has his own hobbies, such as playing ball games, listening to music and drawing. They can bring us pleasure and make us relaxed. We have a lot to say when we talk about hobbies.
Lucky money, however, isn't a proper topic for us, because it's too personal. What's more, not all of us can get lucky money. Some may feel unhappy if we talk about it.
So talking about hobbies is really a good choice.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、话题理由阐述
【点评】
本题为英语话题类发言稿写作,要求学生围绕指定话题阐述理由,结构清晰,考查学生的英语表达能力和逻辑组织能力,是初中英语常见的写作题型。
【难度系数】
0.6