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八、书面表达。(共15分)
美丽的草原对地球生态很重要,请你以“Protecting the grasslands”为题,根据下面提示写一篇80词左右的短文,已给出部分不计入总词数。
提示:
1. 草原的重要性;
2. 人类活动对草原的危害;
3. 保护草原的建议。
Protecting the grasslands
Grasslands are important. Many animals live there, like







答案:One possible version:
Protecting the grasslands
Grasslands are important. Many animals live there, like horses, sheep and cows. Without grasslands, soil might be washed away during the rain.
Now human activities are hurting grasslands. Some people remove grass to grow crops. This kills plants and makes the soil weak.
To save the grasslands, our government should make rules to stop people from using grasslands wrongly. Let farmers take turns feeding their animals. This gives grass time to grow back.
Let's do something to save the grasslands. Grasslands are not empty fields—they are homes for animals!
解析:
【分析】
拿到这道书面表达题,首先要明确题目给出的三个核心写作要点,顺着已给出的开篇语句逐步拓展:第一步,先承接开头的like,列举草原上常见的典型动物,接着补充草原的生态作用,把“草原的重要性”这一要点写完整;第二步,自然过渡到人类的不合理活动,列举开垦草原、过度放牧等常见破坏行为,点明这些行为给草原带来的危害,完成第二个要点;第三步,从政策、日常生产行为等角度给出切实可行的保护建议,最后用简短的呼吁收尾,全程注意控制总词数在80左右,保证所有要点都覆盖到,语句通顺没有语法错误即可。
【解析】
写作按照三段式结构展开,完全贴合题目要求:
1. 完成要点1(草原的重要性):顺着开篇给出的"like"补充草原常见的牲畜例子,再补充草原可以固定水土、避免土壤被雨水冲走的生态价值,清晰点明草原对生态的作用。
2. 完成要点2(人类活动对草原的危害):转折引出当前人类活动正在破坏草原,举例说明部分人铲掉草种农作物的行为,会直接杀死原生植被,让土壤肥力下降,草原逐步退化。
3. 完成要点3(保护草原的建议):从政府制定管控规则、推行轮牧制度两个角度给出具体可落地的方案,最后发出全民共同保护草原的呼吁,收尾点明草原是动物的家园,升华主题。
整体行文逻辑连贯,要点无遗漏,词数符合题干要求。
【答案】
Protecting the grasslands
Grasslands are important. Many animals live there, like horses, sheep and cows. Without grasslands, soil might be washed away during the rain.
Now human activities are hurting grasslands. Some people remove grass to grow crops. This kills plants and makes the soil weak.
To save the grasslands, our government should make rules to stop people from using grasslands wrongly. Let farmers take turns feeding their animals. This gives grass time to grow back.
Let's do something to save the grasslands. Grasslands are not empty fields—they are homes for animals!
【知识点】
环保类英语写作
要点式作文谋篇
常用固定搭配应用
【点评】
本题属于初中阶段常见的提纲类话题作文,话题贴近生态保护的常考范畴,三个写作提示明确给出了行文逻辑框架,学生只需要按照提示顺序填充合理内容,保证要点全覆盖,避免基础语法错误,很容易拿到不错的分数,写作时注意不要堆砌无关内容,控制词数符合题干要求即可。
【难度系数】
0.7
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