在冬天,哈尔滨的天气怎么样?人们在这样的天气里都做些什么?请根据提示写一篇60词左右介绍哈尔滨天气的短文。
提示词语:戴帽子,穿毛衣,玩得高兴,在公园里唱歌、跳舞、踢足球、拍照
写作佳句
1. 天气多雪且有风。
It is
snowy
and
windy
.
2. 我和我的朋友们正玩得很开心。
My friends and I are
having
a
good
time
.
3. 一些女孩正在堆雪人、滑冰、参观冰雕。
Some girls are
making
snowmen
, skating, and visiting ice sculptures.
4. 汤姆正在给一个雪人拍照。
Tom is
taking
a
photo
of a snowman.
思路导引
1. 人称:第
一、三
人称
2. 时态:
现在进行时
3. 体裁:
记叙文
4. 列提纲

答案:It's winter in Harbin. It is snowy and windy. People are wearing hats and sweaters. In the park, my friends and I are having a good time. Some girls are making snowmen, skating, and visiting ice sculptures. Some boys are playing soccer. My best friend Tom is taking a photo of a snowman.
How happy we are!
1. snowy and windy 2. having a good time3. making snowmen 4. taking a photo
1. 一、三 2. 现在进行时 3. 记叙文
解析:
【解析】
1. 开篇点明背景:介绍哈尔滨冬季的时间地点,描述当地多雪多风的天气,引出人们戴帽子、穿毛衣的穿着特征。
2. 主体展开内容:使用现在进行时,描述公园里人们的各类活动,覆盖提示词中玩得高兴、唱歌跳舞、踢足球、拍照等全部要点,叙事条理清晰。
3. 结尾总结收尾:用感叹句抒发大家游玩的愉悦心情,控制总词数在60词左右,保证语句通顺、语法无误。
【答案】
参考范文:
It's winter in Harbin. It is snowy and windy. People are wearing hats and sweaters. In the park, my friends and I are having a good time. Some girls are singing and dancing, some boys are playing soccer, and Tom is taking a photo of a snowman. How happy we are!
配套填空答案:
1. snowy; and; windy
2. having; a; good; time
3. making; snowmen
4. taking; a; photo
思路导引答案:
1. 一、三
2. 现在进行时
3. 记叙文
【知识点】
现在进行时,英语情景写作,常用词汇搭配
【点评】
本题是初中英语低年级的基础写作题,给出了明确的写作提纲和提示词汇,学生只需要按照给定逻辑串联所有要点,正确使用现在进行时的结构描述正在发生的动作,很容易写出符合要求的短文,难度较低。
【难度系数】
0.7