话题分析
本单元的话题是“动物朋友”,通过阳光中学的宠物周了解了不同类型的宠物以及宠物的故事,要求学生运用所学习的知识描写最喜爱的宠物,要写出它的外貌(appearance)、性格(personality)和生活方式(lifestyle)等,表达对宠物的喜爱之情。
素材积累
◆开头句
1. I have a pet named Teddy.
2. This is my little cat. I like it very much.
◆中间句
1. He is always happy to see me.
2. My little cat loves to eat fish and sleep a lot.
3. About three minutes later, it brought me the mouse.
◆结尾句
1. I think it is the best pet in the world.
2. We have so much fun together.
名言积累
1. Kill two birds with one stone.
一箭双雕.
2. A gloved cat catches no mice.
不愿吃苦的人成不了大事业。
经典例题
假如你是 Bob,你最喜爱的动物是猫。请你写一篇 80 词左右的英语短文来帮他介绍一下他的猫。短文的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
【提示】1. What does your cat look like?
2. What is it’s lifestyle?
3. ...
My favourite cat—Do Re Mi
Hello! I’m Bob. This is my little cat. I like it very much.
Do you like my cat? Tell me, please.
写作指导
1. 用第三人称来写。
2. 时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”。
3. 根据提示内容介绍自己的猫,适当增加细节。
写作模板

开篇点题 → This is my little cat. I like it very much...
详细介绍 → My little cat loves to eat fish and sleep a lot...
About three minutes later...
收篇结尾 → Do you like my cat? ...
遣词造句
1. 它有黑色的耳朵,圆眼睛,黑色的鼻子和一个小嘴。(round eyes)
It has black ears, round eyes, a black nose and a small mouth.
2. 一天,我看到它在起居室追老鼠。(run after)
One day, I saw it running after a mouse in the sitting room.
3. 它上下跳,然后逃跑了。(run away)
It jumped up and down and ran away.
高分范文

Hello!
I’m Bob. Thi
s is my li
ttle c
at. I like it very much. Its name is Do Re Mi. It’s very beautiful. ①
It’
s a grey cat.
It has black ears,
round eyes,
a black nose and a small mouth.
My li
ttl
e cat lo
ve
s to eat fish and sleep a lot. ②
It’
s ve
ry fat.
It’
s cute. ③
One day,
it was r
unning after a mouse in the sitting room when I saw it. A
bout three minute
s la
ter, it bro
ught me the mouse. “Well
do
ne, Do Re Mi,” I said happil
y. ④
Then it jumped around and ran away.
Hello! I’m Bob. This is my little cat. I like it very much. Its name is Do Re Mi. It’s very beautiful. ① It’s a grey cat with black ears, round eyes, a black nose and a small mouth.
↳用 with 升格
My little cat loves to eat fish and sleep a lot. ② It’s very fat but it’s cute.
↳用 but 升格
③ One day, I saw it running after a mouse in the sitting room.
↳用 see sb doing sth 升格
About three minutes later, it brought me the mouse. “Well done, Do Re Mi,” I said happily. ④
Then it jumped up and d
own an
d ran away.
↳用 up and down 升格