[经典例题]
“读万卷书，行万里路。”暑假将至，成都某中学计划组织学生来大美凉山开展研学之旅。假如你是李华，请根据以下内容提示，以“Welcome to Liangshan”为主题，写一篇英语短文，向即将到来的成都同学介绍一下你的家乡凉山。
要求：1. 文章应包括所给思维导图中的所有提示内容，可适当发挥；2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息；3. 词数80左右，已给出部分（画直线部分）不计入总词数。
[高分范文]
Welcome to Liangshan,
a place that you will never want to leave once you come. Let me tell you something about it.
It is in the southwest of China. The weather here is warm. You can wear T-shirts or skirts. People are friendly and kind. There are
many places of interest,
such as Lushan Mountain and Lugu Lake. You can taste a lot of delicious local food like tuotuo meat and barbecue.
One of the most popular festivals is the Torch Festival. You can roast a whole lamb.
Also, you can sing and dance happily around the torch.
I hope it will be an unforgettable
experience.
I hope all of you can enjoy yourselves in Liangshan.
[名师点评]
作者根据思维导图描述了自己的家乡，让人们对自己的家乡有一个全面的了解。
① 开篇点题介绍自己的家乡；
② 使用了 such as、also 等词，使文章层次分明，内容连贯；
③ 使用“one of the + 最高级 + 可数名词复数”结构说明了火把节的受欢迎程度；
④ 宾语从句的使用彰显作者扎实的作文功底。
答案：Welcome to Liangshan, a place that you will never want to leave once you come. Let me tell you something about it.
It is in the southwest of China. The weather here is warm. You can wear T-shirts or skirts. People are friendly and kind. There are many places of interest, such as Lushan Mountain and Lugu Lake. You can taste a lot of delicious local food like tuotuo meat and barbecue.
One of the most popular festivals is the Torch Festival. You can roast a whole lamb. Also, you can sing and dance happily around the torch.
I hope it will be an unforgettable experience. I hope all of you can enjoy yourselves in Liangshan.
解析：
本题为译林版八年级下册主题介绍类英语写作题，要求以李华的身份向来访的成都同学介绍家乡凉山，写作要求如下：
1. 需完整覆盖思维导图所有提示要素：凉山的区位与气候（地处西南、气候温暖）、当地居民特质（友善和蔼）、知名景点（泸山、泸沽湖）、特色美食（坨坨肉、烧烤）、特色节日火把节的相关活动，可适当补充合理细节丰富内容。
2. 行文逻辑可按照「开篇引入凉山→介绍区位气候与人文风貌→介绍景点与特色美食→介绍火把节特色活动→表达美好祝愿」的顺序展开，使用本册所学的such as、also、one of the+形容词最高级+可数名词复数等结构，保证内容连贯层次清晰，词数控制在80左右，不得出现真实姓名、校名等隐私信息。
[小试身手]
(2025·苏州市吴中区期中) 随着网络和人工智能的不断进步，如今旅游有了两种热门选择：“云游 Online tours”和“亲历 In-person travel”。“云游”借助网络，让我们足不出户就能饱览世界各地的美景；而“亲历”则是亲身前往心仪之地，感受当地的风土人情。这两种方式各有魅力，你更倾向于哪一种呢？请以“My way of travelling”为题，写一篇英语短文。
写作要点：1. 陈述你的选择并说明原因（至少两点）；2. 分享一次令你印象深刻的相关旅行；3. 谈谈你的感悟。
注意事项：1. 词数100左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数；2. 短文须包含所有要点，可以适当发挥；3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
[思路点拨]
本文描述旅行方式，从自身选择、相关原因、旅行举例和感悟等方面进行阐述。时态为一般现在时和一般过去时，人称以第一人称为主。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
My way of travelling
Different ways of travelling may give us different feelings. I choose
"in-person travel" because it allows me to experience cultures deeply and create unforgettable memories.
Travelling in person lets me feel the local atmosphere. For example, last summer I visited Beijing. Walking through the ancient hutongs, tasting street food, and talking with the locals made me understand Chinese traditions better. What's more, it's a chance to escape daily routines. Climbing the Great Wall taught me perseverance and rewarded me with breathtaking views.
Although "online tours" are convenient, nothing compares to the real adventure. Travelling is not just about seeing; it's about living in the moment.
答案：One possible version:
My way of travelling
Different ways of travelling may give us different feelings. I choose "in-person travel" because it allows me to experience cultures deeply and create unforgettable memories.
Travelling in person lets me feel the local atmosphere. For example, last summer I visited Beijing. Walking through the ancient hutongs, tasting street food, and talking with the locals made me understand Chinese traditions better. What's more, it's a chance to escape daily routines. Climbing the Great Wall taught me perseverance and rewarded me with breathtaking views.
Although "online tours" are convenient, nothing compares to the real adventure. Travelling is not just about seeing; it's about living in the moment.
解析：
【分析】
拿到这道写作题，首先要理清三步思考逻辑：第一步先选定自己的旅行偏好，这里选择亲身旅行，直接点明选择的同时，按照思维导图给出的提示，列出两个核心原因——深度体验文化、创造难忘回忆，完成第一个写作要点；第二步选取提纲提示的北京旅行作为印象深刻的实例，用一般过去时叙事，补充逛古胡同、登长城的具体细节，让内容更真实，完成第二个写作要点；第三步简单对比云游的便利性，突出亲身旅行的独特价值，输出自己的旅行感悟，完成第三个写作要点，最后整体控制词数在100左右，不出现真实个人信息即可。
【解析】
本篇写作按照规范结构分步完成：
1. 开篇点题：承接题干给出的开头句，直接表明自己选择"in-person travel"，同步点明两个核心原因，开门见山亮明观点，完成第一个写作要求。
2. 主体叙事：用for example引出去年夏天的北京之行，分别描述漫步老胡同、品尝街头小吃、和当地人交流，以及攀登长城的具体体验，把亲身旅行的优势具象化，时态切换为一般过去时准确叙事，覆盖第二个写作要点。
3. 结尾升华：先承认云游的便利性，再转折突出亲身旅行的不可替代性，点明感悟：旅行不只是观看，更是活在当下的真实体验，完成第三个写作要点，收尾自然完整。
【答案】
My way of travelling
Different ways of travelling may give us different feelings. I choose "in-person travel" because it allows me to experience cultures deeply and create unforgettable memories.
Travelling in person lets me feel the local atmosphere. For example, last summer I visited Beijing. Walking through the ancient hutongs, tasting street food, and talking with the locals made me understand Chinese traditions better. What's more, it's a chance to escape daily routines. Climbing the Great Wall taught me perseverance and rewarded me with breathtaking views.
Although "online tours" are convenient, nothing compares to the real adventure. Travelling is not just about seeing; it's about living in the moment.
【知识点】
提纲类英语写作，一般过去时运用，旅行话题表达
【点评】
本篇短文完全覆盖题干所有要求的写作要点，严格贴合给定的思维导图框架，人称时态使用准确，逻辑层次分明：先亮明选择说明原因，再用具体旅行实例支撑观点，最后升华感悟，还自然对比了两种旅行方式的差异，内容充实细节生动，词数符合要求，是非常规范的初中英语考场高分作文。
【难度系数】
0.6
