2026年通城学典课时作业本八年级英语下册译林版江苏专版第33页解析答案

[经典例题]
假定你是李华，打算在即将到来的暑假中前往北京旅行，请根据下图提示给你的英国笔友 David 写一封邮件，分享你的旅行计划。

注意：
1. 词数 100 左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
[高分范文]
Dear David，
How’s it going?
With the summer vacation coming soon, I feel so excited that my parents have promised to take my sister and me to Beijing. Now I’d like to share my travel plan with you.
We’ll go there by plane in July and stay for 5 days. During that period, we’re going to visit the Palace Museum to know about stories of the past. Besides, another place we must go to is the Great Wall, which is the longest wall in the world. We’re going to take a walk there and admire how great we Chinese are!
I believe we’ll enjoy ourselves in Beijing. What about your summer plan?
Li Hua
[名师点评]
短文阐述了作者去北京旅游的计划，从时间、地点和活动详细表述计划的内容。
① 作者开篇点题，与好友分享去北京旅游的计划；
② during that period、besides 等词汇的使用使得短文层次分明，表述有条理；
③ how 引导的感叹句作 admire 的宾语，彰显作者扎实的语法功底；
④ “I believe + 宾语从句.”的运用突出了作者对北京旅行的期待。

答案：Dear David，
How’s it going?
With the summer vacation coming soon, I feel so excited that my parents have promised to take my sister and me to Beijing. Now I’d like to share my travel plan with you.
We’ll go there by plane in July and stay for 5 days. During that period, we’re going to visit the Palace Museum to know about stories of the past. Besides, another place we must go to is the Great Wall, which is the longest wall in the world. We’re going to take a walk there and admire how great we Chinese are!
I believe we’ll enjoy ourselves in Beijing. What about your summer plan?
Li Hua

解析：

本题为译林版八年级下册要求掌握的提纲类邮件写作，核心考查一般将来时的实际运用，需完整覆盖思维导图的全部提示要点：出行时间、同行人员、出行方式、停留时长、2项旅行活动、2项活动的对应原因。写作需符合英文邮件的规范格式，开篇自然引入话题，使用衔接词让行文逻辑通顺，词数控制在100左右，不得出现真实姓名、学校等私人信息。

[小试身手]
（2025·扬州市江都区模拟）春天是游览扬州的最佳季节，Tom 和他的同学在计划一个去扬州的三日游，请写一个关于本次旅行的计划，包括其注意点。
注意：
1. 短文中必须包含所有要点，可以适当发挥，不要简单翻译；
2. 100 词左右，开头已经写好，不计入总词数；
3. 短文中请勿提及真实姓名。

博物馆之旅，了解当地文化
第二天
享受自然之美（如 the Slender West Lake，He Garden）
第三天
[思路点拨]
本文主要是介绍旅行计划，从旅行的时间、人员、具体活动和感受等方面进行描述。短文内容是对将来进行描述，故要用一般将来时，因为是描述“我们”的旅行，所以要以第一人称为主。
[写作提纲]

[妙笔生花]
Spring is coming. We are planning to visit Yangzhou.

Yangzhou has changed a lot. Its beautiful flowers, fresh air, clean streets and convenient transport make it perfect for a spring trip.

Here's our plan. On the first day, we'll visit museums to learn about local culture.

On the second day, we'll enjoy nature in the Slender West Lake and He Garden.

On the last day, we'll taste delicious food and shop for gifts on Dongguan Street.

Don't forget to check the weather, wear comfortable shoes, and bring cameras.

Let's keep the environment clean and follow public rules.

We're excited to explore Yangzhou's beauty.

（更多精彩作文素材见“背记手册”）

答案：One possible version:
Spring is coming. We are planning to visit Yangzhou. Yangzhou has changed a lot. Its beautiful flowers, fresh air, clean streets and convenient transport make it perfect for a spring trip.
Here's our plan. On the first day, we'll visit museums to learn about local culture. On the second day, we'll enjoy nature in the Slender West Lake and He Garden. On the last day, we'll taste delicious food and shop for gifts on Dongguan Street.
Don't forget to check the weather, wear comfortable shoes, and bring cameras. Let's keep the environment clean and follow public rules. We're excited to explore Yangzhou's beauty.

解析：

【分析】
首先拿到题目先明确核心要求：这是一篇旅行计划类应用文，需要以第一人称、一般将来时完成扬州三日游的写作，要覆盖给定的所有要点：第一天参观博物馆了解当地文化、第二天游览瘦西湖和何园欣赏自然之美，还要补充第三天的合理行程、加入出行注意事项，总词数100左右，不能出现真实个人信息。接下来梳理行文思路：第一步承接题目给出的开头，简单铺垫扬州春日适合出游的优势，自然引出旅行计划；第二步按时间顺序依次介绍三天的安排，补充符合扬州特色的第三天行程，比如去东关街品尝美食、选购伴手礼，让行程逻辑完整；第三步补充出行相关的注意事项，最后收尾表达对本次旅行的期待，写完后核对所有要点是否都覆盖，时态是否统一，词数是否符合要求即可。
【解析】
1. 开篇承接给定开头，简单介绍扬州春日的优势：繁花、新鲜空气、整洁街道和便利交通都非常适合春游，自然引出后续的行程计划。
2. 按时间顺序展开三日行程：第一天安排参观博物馆，了解扬州本土文化；第二天前往瘦西湖、何园游览，欣赏自然与园林的美景；第三天安排去东关街品尝特色美食、选购旅行伴手礼，补全完整的三日行程逻辑。
3. 补充题干要求的注意点：提醒大家提前查询天气、穿舒适的鞋子、携带相机，同时倡导文明出游，遵守公共秩序、爱护环境。
4. 最后收尾表达对探索扬州美景的期待，全文统一使用第一人称和一般将来时，控制总词数在100左右，所有要点全部覆盖，没有生硬翻译要点，符合写作要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Spring is coming. We are planning to visit Yangzhou. Yangzhou has changed a lot. Its beautiful flowers, fresh air, clean streets and convenient transport make it perfect for a spring trip.
Here's our plan. On the first day, we'll visit museums to learn about local culture. On the second day, we'll enjoy nature in the Slender West Lake and He Garden. On the last day, we'll taste delicious food and shop for gifts on Dongguan Street.
Don't forget to check the weather, wear comfortable shoes, and bring cameras. Let's keep the environment clean and follow public rules. We're excited to explore Yangzhou's beauty.
【知识点】
一般将来时
旅行应用文写作
写作要点整合
【点评】
本篇范文逻辑清晰，完全贴合题干的全部写作要求，所有给定要点都自然融入行文当中，补充的行程和注意事项贴合扬州本地特色与出游实际，时态统一使用一般将来时符合计划类写作的规范，语言流畅自然，没有生硬翻译要点，词数符合100词左右的要求，是一篇符合应试标准的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.7