作业16 Assessment & Further study(单元写作提升)
话题分析
本单元的话题是“学校生活”,在了解了他人的学校生活后,运用所学的语言知识来描述自己的学校生活,并给出改善学校生活的一些建议。写作时首先要写出自己在一所什么类型的学校读书,然后写出自己的学校生活怎么样,要采用多种句式进行描写。
素材积累
◆开头句
1. My name is Nancy, and I study at Woodland Secondary School.
2. I am writing to give some suggestions on how to improve some parts of our school life.
◆中间句
1. We can take part in different types of sports.
2. The library is a great place for us to enjoy reading.
3. The arts are as important as languages.
◆结尾句
1. I hope you will find my suggestions useful.
2. Time flies when we are enjoying school!
◆谚语积累
1. There is no end to learning. 学无止境。
2. A young idler, an old beggar. 少壮不努力,老大徒伤悲。
经典例题
(2022·江苏无锡宜兴丁蜀学区调研)假如你是婷婷,你想给你的美国笔友Tom写一封邮件,介绍你的学校和学校生活。
【要点】
1. 学校有什么设施？
2. 有什么课外活动？
3. 自己有什么感想？
【要求】1. 90词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
2. 必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥,使全文连贯、完整。
Hi, Tom!
Thanks for your email. Now I want to tell you something about my school and my school life.______
I think my school is great and my school life is colourful. I have much fun here.
All the best,
Tingting
写作指导
1. 本文是一封邮件。 2. 时态为一般现在时。
3. 根据所给提示要点完成写作,不能遗漏信息,以第一人称为主。
写作模板

遣词造句
1. 我喜欢我的学校是因为它明亮又整洁的教室。(bright and tidy)
2. 我们每天花费大约一小时做家庭作业。(spend)
3. 我最喜欢的俱乐部是英语俱乐部,因为我能在那里提高我的英语口语。(improve my spoken English)
高分范文
Hi, Tom!
Thanks for your email. Now I want to tell you something about my school and my school life.
I am a student in the eighth grade. Our classes start at 8:00 in the morning and finish at 5:00 in the afternoon. We have lunch at 12:00 and our lunchtime lasts for one hour. I love my school for its bright and tidy classrooms and the modern library has a large collection of books. We have a wide range of subjects which we can freely choose from. We spend about one hour doing our homework every day. There are many clubs and activities available, which make our school life exciting. My favourite club is the English Club because I can improve my spoken English there.
I think my school is great and my school life is colourful. I have much fun here.
All the best,
Tingting