话题分析
本单元的话题是“自然世界”,通过学习本单元内容,学生可以了解地球上不同类型的生态系统、生态系统面临的困境以及如何保持生态系统的平衡。写作时可就生态系统的某一方面进行叙述,叙述现状或目前存在的问题,号召人们采取行动,可运用所学词汇增加文章的感染力和说服力。
素材积累
- 开头句
1. I am writing to ask for your help in protecting the ocean.
2. Birds are our friends, and we should try to help them.
- 中间句
1. Wetlands are important for wildlife.
2. Many birds live in Zhalong Nature Reserve all year round.
3. The government created laws to stop people from hunting.
- 结尾句
1. It's meaningful to join an environmental group.
2. Together we can help protect the ocean.
- 谚语积累
1. Don't go fishing in rivers; don't compete with waterbirds for food. 莫去江河钓鱼,不与水鸟争食。
2. Protect birds, protect wildlife and maintain ecological balance. 爱护鸟类,爱护野生动物,保持生态平衡。
经典例题
理性的人类应当深怀敬畏之心,敬畏自然,敬畏生命,实现人与自然和谐共生。作为观鸟俱乐部的一员,你将作为学生代表谈谈入会以来的所见、所闻、所感。请你根据以下要点用英语写一篇演讲稿。
【要点】1. 你喜欢什么鸟？
2. 鸟面临什么样的问题？
3. 你如何与鸟和谐共生？
【注意】1. 词数 90 左右。
2. 包含上述所有要点信息,可适当发挥。
3. 文中不得出现真实校名和姓名等信息。
Hello, everyone! I am happy to be here to share my ideas with you.______
Thanks for listening!
写作指导
1. 本文是一篇演讲稿。
2. 时态为一般现在时。
3. 写作要求已给出,不要遗漏所给要点,可适当添加细节,写作时保持主谓一致,注意词数要求。
写作模板
遣词造句
1. 我对不同种类的鸟很了解。(different kinds of)______
I have known much about different kinds of birds.
2. 他们画中的鸟确实很漂亮。(really)______
The birds in their pictures are really beautiful.
3. 人们通过使湿地变得更小来为农场和大楼腾地方。(make wetlands smaller)______
People make space for farms and buildings by making wetlands smaller.
高分范文
Hello, everyone! I am happy to be here to share my ideas with you.
As a member of the Birdwatching Club, I
have known much about di
fferent kinds of birds. Among them, I like red-crowned cranes best which have a long neck and long legs.
Each time I go birdwatching, I always find that most people treat birds kindly and consider them as friends. Some artists like to paint birds. T
he birds in their pictures are really beautiful. Some writers like to include birds in their stories too.
However, birds are still facing some problems.
People make space for farms and buildings
by making wetlands smaller. Furthermore, some people hunt rare birds to make money. Such terrible behaviours lead to smaller numbers of wild birds.
Birds are part of our lives. So it's time for us humans to change the situation. Let's create a peaceful world for all the wildlife and ourselves.
Thanks for listening!
